25 August 2008 @ 11:15 am
Torchwood Fic: The Siege of Annwfn (10/10)  

Title: The Siege of Annwfn (10/10)

Author: Emma

Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, Torchwood Three Team, Others.

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Spoilers: None. This takes place in my Homecoming AU, a few months after The Eye of Neith.

Summary: The only things that stand between our Universe and disaster are Torchwood Three and Ianto’s growing powers.
Author's Note: The next story in this Universe will be The Hour of the Wolf; however, Captain John Hart insists that I tell you what happened to change his life around. So next up, A Very Private War.


Part one is here; Part two is here; Part three is here; Part four is here; Part five is here; Part six is here; Part seven is here; Part eight is here; Part ten is here

            The Doctor rushed to stand over Jack’s and Ianto’s bodies, using his sonic screwdriver almost like a sword to deflect the energy being thrown at them. The ghostly Time Lords pressed in, trying to overwhelm him. The attack forced him to his knees, but he still managed to block their thrusts.

 

            “Andy, John,” he shouted, “get inside that room. Seven items with identical symbols on them. Start smashing!”

 

            Two of the ghosts tried to follow John and Andy, but when they reached the doorway they bounced back as if they had hit a brick wall. The Doctor’s actions had given Ianto a little breathing space. He knew he wasn’t strong enough to take the ghosts on by himself, but he could help the Doctor keep them pinned in place until John and Andy could finish their job.

 

            He didn’t have long to wait. The sound of smashing glass from the other room made the ghosts scream in agony. The attack ended as abruptly as it had begun.

 

            “Stop! Please stop!”

 

            “Andy, John,” the Doctor shouted, “hold off for a moment!” He turned to Jack and Ianto. “Are you two all right?”

 

            Ianto helped Jack to stand up. “We’re fine, Doctor.”

 

            “Yeah,” Jack muttered, “as soon as the elves stop playing bagpipes in my head I’ll be just great!”

 

            “Well, then, let’s go see what’s what. Allons-y, gentlemen.”

 

            The room was round, and not very large. A central column carved to resemble a tree supported a domed crystal roof. Its branches spread across the glass and ran down the walls. The tree was circled by a large platform with four staircases leading up to it from each cardinal point, ending in a work station complete with crystal dials and buttons. At one end of the room, seven high-backed chairs had been placed in a semicircle, facing the tree. In each chair rested a carved crystal casket. Two of them had been smashed to powder. Andy and John stood over a third, guns at the ready. 

 

            “It’s a TARDIS control room!” Jack said to the Doctor. “There are a few differences, but that’s what this is supposed to be.”

 

            “In honour of our Lady.” One of the ghosts spoke directly to the Doctor, ignoring Jack as if he had been a piece of furniture. “She was lost to us in the War.”

 

            “Lost?” A harsh voice said contemptuously. They turned to face the speaker. The young man Jack had seen at the hospital stood in a small archway. He was secured to a large ring set in the stone by a thick bluish-gray metal chain long enough to allow him to move all through the rooms and probably the landing outside.

 

            The ghostly Time Lord turned and pointed at the young man, who collapsed to his knees, tears running down his face. The Doctor ran to his side, but was shoved to the ground as a bolt of energy smashed into the wall right above his head. He turned to see  another one of the ghosts start to point.

 

            “Oi! Gwallgofddyn!” bellowed Andy, as he brought the butt of his gun down on top of one of the caskets. “Do you want me to finish this off?”

 

            “No!”

 

            “Then behave!”

 

            The Doctor jumped up then assisted the young man to his feet. “My thanks. Gwair, is it?”

 

            “Gwair…” he broke off, laughing bitterly. “Captive, that’s what that means. I’ve been here so long, I’ve nearly forgotten my own name. I am Tyren, and I was an engineer at the hyper-loom complex in the Eye of Harmony.”

            “Then my thanks to Tyren, TARDIS Engineer.” The Doctor shook his hand. “And we better see about this.”

 

            He pressed the sonic screwdriver against the section of the chain where it has been soldered to itself. There was a sound like frying sausages and an acrid smell that scraped the back of the throat. The chain fell open at Gwair’s – Tyren’s – feet.

 

            “Tyren, where is Donna Noble?" Jack asked.

 

            “One more illusion to destroy, Captain Harkness,” Tyren pointed at the column. “The device you used to get here should work.”

 

            John walked to the center of the room. “Where?”

 

            “Where the column and the platform meet.”

 

            The ghost who had fired at the Doctor surged towards John. “Nooo!”

 

            “Listen, you moron,” Andy tapped the casket with the butt of his gun, this time chipping off several small pieces. “I told you to behave!”

 

            John aimed the manipulator at the column and pressed the buttons. Parts of the column and the platform faded away. In their place was a framework of gleaming black metal supporting a cauldron-shaped space outlined by nine white spheres that gleamed like pearls. Lines extended from the pearls, creating a cradle where red-gold energy burned sullenly.

 

            “A hyper-loom!” said the Doctor. “You have been trying to grow a TARDIS?”

 

            Tyren nodded. “They thought it was safe now.”

 

            “Be silent!” snapped one of the ghosts. “This is Time Lord business.”

 

            “Very well,” said the Doctor. “Time Lord to Time Lord, who are you and what in the name of Rassilon do you think you’re doing?”

 

            “Our Universe was overrun by Daleks. We could not hold them back. Our crew was instructed to defend the Neural Construction Docks.  We came under heavy fire and our Lady was damaged beyond repair. With the last of her strength she built us this Universe so we could start again someday.”

 

            “Ummm… I see.” The Doctor and Jack exchanged a look. “Tyren, do you corroborate this story?”

 

            “No, I do not.” The young man’s eyes were full of contempt as he looked at the cowering Time Lords. “They were so terrified of the Daleks that they tried to bargain. Contacted the commander of one of the advance fleets, turned over all the defense plans, the routes to the Docks, everything they could get, in exchange for their lives. Well, if you know Daleks you know how well that worked. They barely managed to get away. They showed up at the Nursery one step ahead of the Dalek fleet and grabbed one of the hyper-looms…and me. Then they ran, looking for any bolt hole.”

 

            “And they found the Rift,” Jack prompted.

 

            “We hid inside it for centuries, searching for the right place, one where Time Lords and Daleks exterminated each other. They thought it would be easier for them. Their probability reads said this was the place, so they used up the last of their fuel to break free of the Rift.” He laughed. “When they realized they had gotten it wrong again, they did what they do best. They hid. Cannibalized their TARDIS to create this place and send it back in time, then discarded their bodies and sealed themselves in their caskets.”

            “Chameleon arches?”

 

            “Yes. Some Time Lords carried them to battle, as a last measure.” Tyren shrugged. “And there we stayed for a millennia, waiting until it was safe to emerge, monitoring the energy patterns for the appearance of wild TARDIS they could use.”

 

            “And their Lady?” Ianto asked softly.

 

            “When she realized what they had done, what they were, she self-terminated. I had never seen a TARDIS commit suicide before.” He sounded like a lost child. “I couldn’t stop her!”

 

            There was a long silence, then the Doctor turned to the ghosts. “Jack? Whom do you believe?”

 

            Jack grinned fiercely. “Tyren.”

 

            “You would believe him rather than your own kin? You would trust this monstrosity? His monstrous lover? They are wrong, they do not belong in a Time Lord universe.” One of the ghosts addressed the Doctor. “We could help you recreate Gallifrey. We could be friends, colleagues. My name is…”

 

            “Be silent,” the Doctor said mildly. “You have forfeited your right to a name and to any claim of kinship. As for these monstrosities, whatever they are or will be, they are mine. Mine to care for and protect and love. The one you stole was my best friend, the sister of my spirit. Do you really think I would trade her for you? Let you turn her into your servant?”

 

            ‘That’s the best part of it,” Gwair said. “They can’t. She refuses to accept imprinting.”

 

            “Well, she wouldn’t, would she?  The poem says the cauldron will not cook the food of a coward or one forsworn. Miss Noble sounds like a hell of a lady. She wouldn’t want any business with this lot.” Andy looked at Tyren with a smile. “You wrote it, didn’t you?”

 

            “They let me out from time to time to observe and report back. And… to do what they want. I saw the Doctor and Captain Harkness and I knew I would have a chance. So I went back to the almost-beginning and planted the poem on the bard.” He laughed. ‘They always underestimated me. I’m a time Engineer. I have a few tricks of my own.”

 

            The Doctor reached into the hyper-loom to stroke the energy; it seemed to grow brighter at his touch. “Release her, Tyren. As for the rest of you…”

 

            “Can’t you understand? We want to live again, to have bodies again, to feel!”

 

            “Whose bodies were you planning to use? Whose lives would you have stolen?” The Doctor smiled bitterly. “And what have you done to me? Now I have to destroy my own one more time.”

 

            *Tell the Other’s One that it is not his place. The crime was committed against TARDIS. We both speak for our kind.*

 

            “Doctor,” Ianto said. “The TARDIS say that it is up to them to dispense justice in this case. I really don’t think we should interfere.”

 

            The Doctor stared at him for a moment, then nodded and stepped back.

 

            *Like this.*

 

            Ianto could feel the two TARDIS reach into his mind. He expanded again and again as the Vortex traveled through him. He looked at the ghosts, and in less time than it takes a heart to beat twice he measured and chose carefully. The caskets exploded as the ghosts winked out of existence.

 

            “Duw,” Andy whispered. “Can we just get out of here?”

 

            “My thoughts exactly,” said John. He took off his wrist strap and laid it on the platform. “We have ten minutes. Let’s move, people. Tyren, with us.”

 

            “I cannot. I am over a thousand years old. My body is maintained by the same energy that sustains this Universe. When it disappears so will I. As will the hounds.” He grinned joyfully. “We will be free. Go, all of you. Run!”

 

            They pelted down the stairs, across the courtyard, and through the open castle gates. Ianto could hear Jack and the Doctor laughing like idiots and realized he was grinning himself. As they neared the standing stone, they could see the dome starting to collapse. Lightning crisscrossed its surface and set the copper grass on fire; from behind them came the sounds of glass and metal being crushed. They dove through the opening just as it was starting to fold in on itself, landing in a heap on the dirt floor of the dig.

 

            The Doctor turned over, narrowly avoiding shoving an elbow into Andy’s stomach, to find a ball of red-gold energy floating in front of him. He extended a hand. The energy enveloped it, then flowed up his arm, rubbed against his face like a cat, then winked out.

 

            “Good-bye, Donna,” the Doctor voice hitched. “You were fantastic.”

 

            Ianto leaned into Jack and whispered. “He doesn’t get it yet.”

 

            “Get what?”

 

            “Jack, how did the doctor get his TARDIS?”

 

            “He… well… requisitioned it.”

 

            “He stole it, Jack.” Ianto chortled. “And it never occurred to him to ask himself why a TARDIS that was already bonded to another would allow herself to be stolen so easily?”

 

            Jack’s jaw dropped half way to his knees. ‘You mean…”

 

            “She’s not only traveling through space, but back in time. Soon she will join a small herd that will be corralled and taken to the hyper-looms at the Eye of Harmony. She will grow herself, and she will wait for him until he is ready.”

 

            Jack gave a great shout of laughter. His merriment set Ianto off and the two laughed until tears ran down their faces.

 

            “Oi, you two!” The Doctor bounced up to them “What’s so funny?”



 
 
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[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:03 pm (UTC)
Wait . . . Donna is the Doctor's TARDIS? Oh, but oh that just brilliant. That is just . . . wow. I'm crying. My god, you are a genius. RTD should hire you right now.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
Wow that was fast. Yeah, Donna's the Doctor TARDIS. I wrote kind of a beginning and end for the story in a mad rush right after I found out the ending of DW, because it pissed me off that they had sent Donna back to being the little horror she was in the Bride, but I didn't know how to take it from beginning to end. Then, the whole poem thing was a separate story until... boom. Collission. Glad it worked!
(no subject) - [identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] teiira.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC)
Okay, the ending, pure brilliance. I also like how you do the TARDIS. I like when authors actually use the TARDIS as the sentient beings they are. Great story arc!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad it worked.
rhianona: kenshin cast[personal profile] rhianona on August 25th, 2008 04:17 pm (UTC)
How bloody fantastic! Donna as the TARDIS! How utterly wonderful and a terrific twist. I'm glad that the Doctor didn't have to kill the ghostly Time Lords.

This was a really fun fic to read and I love how you wove Welsh mythology into this universe as well as a really great team fic.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:19 pm (UTC)
Thanks! It's my sort of response to the last epi of DW this series. Pissed me off no end.

Yeah, I didn't want the Doctor to have to kill more Time Lords. Poor guy. He's just come to grips with the fact that there are all these people around him that love him, and that he loves... I didn't want to traumatize him again!
[identity profile] etmuse.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 04:55 pm (UTC)
Ooh, this is just lovely. And the little bit of TARDIS that was part of Donna going back to become the Doctor's TARDIS eventually, just so utterly brilliant. And poor Tyren... saves the day but cannot be saved himself.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 05:14 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!
[identity profile] mellyna.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 05:01 pm (UTC)
Amazing story. Love what you did with Donna, that was great. Thanks for sharing.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 05:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
[identity profile] gypsylady.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 05:05 pm (UTC)
Marvelous ending! I love it love it love it!

Donna as the TARDIS makes so much sense. The TARDIS is just as feisty and just as demanding and, dare I say it, just as human and compassionate as Donna.

Good job. No, not good. Great. Great job!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 05:15 pm (UTC)
See, I thought the same thing. The TARDIS has a Donna personality...
Thanks!
[identity profile] faithharkness.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)
Okay, I thought you describing Donna as the Doctor's little sister in the last chapter was the most perfect characterization ever. But making her his TARDIS? There aren't words to describe how wonderful that is. Thank you for sharing this story!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I thought the Donna/10 relationship was so beautiful and I was so pissed off at the last episode that I wrote this.. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[identity profile] tayla36.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
this is lovely.
I like how you weave together the adventure story
with the personal story
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 06:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm glad you have enjoyed it.
[identity profile] t-mystery01.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 07:01 pm (UTC)
Wow!! I just finished read this whole series!! very very good wonderful story!!! I loved the ending and I can so see Donna as the Doctor's TARDIS!!!!! Would love to see the expresion on the doctors face when they tell him!!!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you! And I don't think they are going to tell him for a while... but he will discover it at some point...
[identity profile] firredheadedelf.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 08:44 pm (UTC)
Donna as the Doctor's TARDIS...fantastic. Love the idea.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 12:33 am (UTC)
Thanks. As I've said before, my reaction to the last episode of DW.
[identity profile] imzadi1311.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 10:13 pm (UTC)
I loved the whole thing. You have such amazing ideas, weaving torchwood and mythology together, they are really good plots and anyone could act as a real torchwood episode. I am also amazed that you have another two coming up. Thank you for taking the time to entertain us all so well.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 12:35 am (UTC)
Thank you, but it's not really me, it's the plot bunnies; they are fruitful and multiply!
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2008 10:16 pm (UTC)
Lovely, lovely story. I've adored this whole series but Donna as the Doctor's TARDIS has to be one of the best ideas ever, it's perfect. I love you!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 12:35 am (UTC)
Thank you. Coming from one of my favorite writers, praise indeed!
Auresse[personal profile] auresse on August 26th, 2008 01:46 am (UTC)
Um.
NO! NOT finished! *stamps foot*. MORE!

ahem... sorry I occasionally loose control of the , she can be very demanding. What I'd like to say is that THIS is a wonderful, carefully crafted novella. It flows well and leaves the reader hungry for more. I love the fantasy aspect of it- you took The Doctor right out of his pseudo science world and threw him into Myths and Legends. Very creative and inventive plot.

I felt a little lost by the number of characters... it's a short story and even though I'm familiar with the players - I sometimes felt like I was on a carousel of cast members.

MORE! :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 11:55 am (UTC)
I try to keep it to the characters I absolutely need. The first draft usually looks like War and Peace! More in a while. First, John.
HoldinGoff[identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
*picks self up off ground*

DoctorDonna the Tardis; gads, does that explain a lot. The stubborn beh avior, the random overshots-- its Donna yanking his chain.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 11:55 am (UTC)
Exactly!!!
[identity profile] just4bri.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 01:34 pm (UTC)
Hey there,

I was waiting for this to finish before reading it (having been burnt by reading WIPs in the past).

On reading the header I discovered that this was part of a verse, so started reading `Homecoming`, last night! I got part way through your tale of how Andy Joined Torchwood and decided that at 4am I should get some sleep, but came straight back to finish reading today.

I really love this verse, and I'm glad that there's more to come. I loved how Ianto and Andy got their friendship back on track, very believable. It's so obvious that Donna is the Doctors Tardis, I don't know how the RTD et.al missed it!!!! ;) It's a great idea, and fixes the huge error that the BBC writers made when the had the Doctor wipe Donna's mind and also explains the whole `independence streak` that is the Doctor's Tardis.

Ianto in a symbiotic relationship with a Tardis/a new Tardis hybrid, is fabulous! But I think I caught something in there about Ianto having been different/unusual `before` he became part Tardis?

Would also love to find out how Ianto and John became friends in this verse. I always thought that John had a soft spot for Ianto, as he's the only member of Jacks team that he gave a nickname too (Eye Candy), and the only one he didn't hurt in KKBB. And Ianto, rather that outright refusing the offered threesome, like he did when Owen suggested one, he was obviously considering it, however briefly, when John suggested it.

Looking forward to reading more of this verse and any other Who/Torchwood tales you have (as long as there's a Jack/Ianto relationship acknowledged in the tale).

Thank you for sharing, sorry for the rambling,

A.J

Edited 2008-08-26 01:42 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 01:51 pm (UTC)
Please ramble away! I love it when new readers have lots to say.

Ianto in a symbiotic relationship with a Tardis/a new Tardis hybrid, is fabulous! But I think I caught something in there about Ianto having been different/unusual `before` he became part Tardis?

Yes. Ianto had a Metastructure attach itself to him at birth, as one did with Donna. Metastructures are the basis for a TARDIS, and in this AU, during the Time War Daleks attacked the TARDIS nurseries and destroyed the metastructures being "grown" into TARDIS. Pieces of them were scattered through spacetime; many landed on Earth. Metastructures are attracted to a certain kind of mind, and will attach themselves to them as a form of "completing" themselves.

Well, I don't know how Ianto and John became friends yet. John is being obstreperous and wants me to tell another story first, so...

Yeah, I was ticked off at the last episode of DW this series, so this is sort of a response...

Again, thanks for the appreciation!



Edited 2008-08-26 01:51 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] srah-scottydog.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 05:46 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD!!!
That is... That's....

ARGH!! Cannot comment right now, laughing and crying at the same time!! HAH!
BRILLIANT!!!

xxx
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2008 05:50 pm (UTC)
Now that is the perfect reaction!
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_miss_daisy_/ on August 27th, 2008 12:34 am (UTC)
I just read all of the stories in this series and I have to say that I am impressed. I loved them all. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] gingerlr.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 02:50 am (UTC)
you're brilliant, just brilliant
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 12:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 06:20 am (UTC)
Oh, wow, loved that twist!!! And loved the series!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 12:11 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!
[identity profile] 42footprints.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 09:37 pm (UTC)
Ianto has TARDIS knowledge, that's just too funny. Lovely to see Jack one step ahead for once.

There are two perfect moments here, not that I'm not deeply enamoured of the rest too. The first is the Doctor's epic rage when dealing with the ghost time lords. Reminds me a little bit of the 'you lost the right to even speak to me' speech from the Bad Wolf episode in series one, or the 'I used to have so much mercy' speech from the School Reunion episode in series two. The second is the punishment of the TARDIS, which reminds me somewhat of the Doctor's punishment of the family in the Family of Blood episodes in series three. All of which goes to say; your characterisation is working fantastically here.

Donna as the Doctor's TARDIS, by the way, master-stroke. It's poignant, sad, and hilarious, all at the same time.

Glad to see John won't take no for an answer, I'm looking forward to reading his reform.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2008 10:17 pm (UTC)
HAH! You got it! I even mention the Family at one point in a previous part. My primary concern was to show the Doctor as being, for once, irrevocably on Jack's side. When he tells the other time lords that "the monstrosities are mine to care for, protect, and love" he's cast his lot.

I wanted very much to change Donna's fate. I HATED the end of that episode.
[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2008 01:20 am (UTC)
What a brilliant ending. Donna as the TARDIS - just brilliant.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2008 03:22 am (UTC)
I didn't know if it would work. I am SO glad people liked it.
[identity profile] doctor-addicted.livejournal.com on September 11th, 2008 06:41 am (UTC)
Oh Yes!
*does a little happy dance*
Of course Donna is the Doctor's TARDIS' potentiality! His ship is so feisty and brave and temperamental, it could only have been her! I'll happily believe this to become canon now, just because I can. Thanks for that *g* Just loving it!
Another marvellous story in your verse :D
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 11th, 2008 12:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I wanted to change Donna's fate, so I did! Fic writing is fun that way...
[identity profile] evester.livejournal.com on April 28th, 2009 11:32 pm (UTC)
That is absolute genius!!! The DoctorDonna is a match made in heaven. You are made of win.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on April 28th, 2009 11:44 pm (UTC)
Isn't it, though? I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Edited 2009-04-28 11:55 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on May 14th, 2009 04:06 pm (UTC)
Oh that is just brilliant!!!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on May 14th, 2009 04:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's very special when someone whose work I like likes mine.
(no subject) - [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on May 14th, 2009 04:27 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] songspinner9.livejournal.com on July 12th, 2009 02:21 am (UTC)
I just found your stories, really. And got stuck reading them all the way through my dinner and afterwards. WOW. This was was brilliant - perfect characterization of all of them (I love your John and Andy as much as the others) and what an absolutely astonishing ending!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 12th, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
Thank you. This is another "what the fuck were they thinking" story!