25 July 2008 @ 11:51 am
Torchwood Fic: The Eye of Neith (4/10)  
Title: The Eye of Neith (4/10)
Author: Emma
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Rhys, Martha, Andy, John Hart; Jack/Ianto, mentions of past others
Rating: R, maybe
Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?
Spoilers: None. Takes place twenty or so years after Series 2 ends.
Summary: Torchwood’s past and Ianto’s future collide when Ianto’s former lover arrives in Cardiff asking for help… 
Author's Note: Validium is featured in the classic Doctor Who episode Silver Nemesis

Homecoming is here; Part one is here; Part two is here; Part three is here

 

            Jack watched Ianto demolish his fifth scone.  His usually fastidious partner was wolfing down everything in sight with the abandon of a six-year-old. Ianto had come out of his faint clear-headed but starved to the point of shaking.  Davies had requested Mrs. Bolton to provide some food as fast as possible; the housekeeper had rolled in a packed tea trolley in less than ten minutes.

 

            “I was keeping myself busy with a bit of baking, you see,” she said, waving away Jack and Ianto’s thanks, “so it was just heating up water for tea.  Just ring if you need anything else.”

 

            Jack was not happy with the turn of events.  Ianto had returned to Cardiff but not to Torchwood.  He socialized with the team and had been recruited by Rhys and Tom into their not-so-ironically named Torchwood Spouses Mutual Aid Society and Rugby Association.  He had become the go-to uncle for all their kids, especially Martha’s oldest, Addy, who wanted to be an artist.  But Ianto’s present life had nothing to do with weevils, Rift blowouts, or Time Lords. Except that Time Lord business may have come looking for him. Dammit.

 

            “This is more than just an Egyptian relic, isn’t it? “ Davies sat back with an unhappy sight.  “Are you going to confiscate it?”

 

            “Alex!” Isabella all but screamed. “You’re just going to give it up?”

 

            “Bella, my dear, we’ve landed in the middle of Torchwood business.  Captain Harkness can pretty much do anything he wants.”

 

            Bella glared at Jack. “So you have the right to steal it?”

 

            “Bella, stop it!” snapped Ianto.

 

            Jack touched Ianto’s wrist in reassurance then turned to face the other two. “Right now I’m going to do nothing. Ianto and I are both affected by it. Mr. Davies isn’t, so we will leave it with him while we return to Cardiff and pick up some equipment. I’m assuming this room is secure.”

 

            “Like a fortress.” Davies said. “I have a number of very valuable items other than the Eye.”

 

            “Good. I’ll ask Inspector Beckwith to leave a guard on the grounds until we get back.”

 

            “I’ll stay with Alex,” Bella said.

 

            “No, you won’t,” Jack said flatly. “We'll need to pick your brains for more information. Besides, you seem to be as much a target as Mr. Davies. Putting the two of you and the Eye in one place is asking for trouble.” He turned to Davies. "What can you tell us about the seller?”

 

            “Nothing much. I don’t know why he picked me. There are others more receptive to illegal offers, but he seemed to know of me. Very young and slender, a boy really, with red hair and green eyes. Wore a crossed-arrows earring, left ear. Seemed very scared.”

 

            Bella gasped.  All three men looked at her.

 

            “Do you know him?” Jack asked.

 

            “What? No! No.  I was just… thinking.”

 

            Jack traded a look with Ianto, who shook his head imperceptibly. “All right.  We’ll go to Cardiff, get some people working on research, and get back here with something that can neutralize this thing.” He extended a hand to Ianto. “OK?”

 

            Ianto took Jack’s hand and heaved himself up. “Yep.”

 

            “OK. Let’s go talk to Beckwith.”

 

            They arranged for a police guard -- Beckwith grumbled and blustered but gave in once Jack pointed out that pissing off Torchwood was one thing, but pissing off one of Cardiff’s wealthiest citizens was another -- then started back to the city.  Jack insisted in driving, and Ianto didn’t argue, which told Jack he hadn’t fully recovered.

 

            Jack tapped his earbud. ‘Gwen, we have a developing situation.  Get Martha and Andy back to the Hub, the Gaien can wait…get a couple of containment field generators ready. Tell John to do some research on an Egyptian relic called the Eye of Neith, N-E-I-T-H.  Fine. See you in thirty.”

 

            “Fasten your seat belt,” Ianto advised Isabella. “When Jack says thirty, he means it.”

 

            They raced back to Cardiff in silence.  Jack drove directly into the underground parking lot’s lowest level and stopped in front of a blank wall with a small door almost hidden behind a pillar.

 

            “Ianto.  Do you trust Isabella?”

 

            Ianto paused for a long second. “I used to think so.”

 

            “Ianto!”

 

            “I don’t know who you are! You know more about that thing than you’re telling us.  You used me to get to Jack and his resources… no, please don’t lie.”

 

            “Ianto…”

 

            “Don’t.  I made a mistake once, Bella, and I damn near set off a war for civilization itself.  I am not going to do anything so stupid again!”

 

            “Ianto… It wasn’t… all right, I’ll tell you. The whole truth, this time.”

 

            “All right,” Jack said, tapping the release sequence on the remote control. The wall slid aside silently, revealing the Torchwood garage beyond it. Jack drove through and parked. “Welcome to Torchwood, Professor Branciforte.”

 

            They walked down the short access corridor to the cog door. Jack swiped his hand across the security plate. He watched Isabella as the door rolled open, the claxons went off… and they were faced with four stony-eyed armed people.

 

            “Stand down, everyone. The professor is here by invitation.” He ushered her in with a bow. “Professor Branciforte, may I introduce Gwen Cooper-Williams, second in command, Martha Jones-Milligan, medical officer, John Hart, computer expert, and Andy Davidson, all around guy and police liaison.”

 

            “I also keep this lot in coffee and takeaway,” Andy said with a smile. “The meeting room is ready, Jack.”

 

            “Let’s go, then. The lady has a story to tell us and we don’t have much time.”

 

            As the group assembled, Isabella stood by the plate-glass window, looking down at the main floor.  “You don’t deal with terrorists or international drug barons, do you?”

 

            “Not unless we have to.”  Jack motioned her to a chair. “Enough stalling, Isabella.”

 

            She sat down, accepting a cup of coffee from Andy. “Thank you.” She took a deep breath. “What I told you about the Eye is true.  What I have…avoided telling you is that my family has been the guardians of the Eye since before the days of the Pharaohs.”

 

            Ianto sat up as if he had been jabbed with a hot needle. “You said…”

 

            “I know what I said. We both kept secrets, didn’t we?” Her hand swept out to encompass everything about her. “We have kept our secrets since before Menes united the Two Kingdoms. I had a responsibility to my family as you had one to yours.”

 

            “How did you get your hands on it?” Jack asked.

 

            “Family history says that a great chariot fell from the sky near the town we lived in. We found a man, injured, and we nursed him back to health. He told us he was the priest of the goddess Neith and that she had sent him to find us.  He had magical weapons and tools. He crafted the Eye from the silvery metal and a great red stone he was carrying on the ship… Oh God, I thought it was just a story.  I’ve spent half my professional life looking for the real history of the Eye. It was just a story… but it wasn’t, was it?”

 

            “Nope.” Jack said, not without some sympathy. “How did you come to lose it, Isabella?”

 

            “A woman showed up at… our secret place. She told the guardians on duty that she was Neith come for her Eye. Those who tried to stop her, died. She entered the Sanctuary and touched the Eye. It woke up.” She looked at them, wild-eyed. “It woke up! Since the days of Thutmose III it had been dormant! She took the Eye and left.”

 

            “Damn.” Jack swore. “Andy, get a hold of Beckwith. Tell him to lock Davies in the study with the Eye and make sure there are enough cops on the ground to at least slow her down.”

            Andy left the room at a gallop.

 

            “You must have some security in your place,” Gwen said. “Anything we could use?”

 

            “No. We don’t do security all that well; who would come looking for an Egyptian legend in the middle of the Veneto? All I have is a very bad description from the one survivor. She was dressed in the ancient style, sheath, shawl, and wig. And the Deshret, the Red Crown, as she should have. She was rather otherworldly. Distant. Spoke only when absolutely necessary.”

 

            “Could be anyone.” Jack sat back, fingers steepled under his chin.  “Anything else?”

 

            “The boy who sold the Eye to Alex might be my nephew. He disappeared two days after the theft. I think he picked Alex because he heard about him from me.”

 

            “All right,” Jack said. “Here’s another piece of the puzzle. The Eye is made of proto-validium.”

 

            “Shit!” John straightened up with a jerk.

 

            “Exactly. Supposedly validium was created by the Time Lords. Real validium is sentient and rather nasty.  Proto-validium is not as potent, but it’s still self-aware enough to influence the minds of those it can reach. Scientists assume it was the result of a botched experiment, but now…”

 

            “That’s why you didn’t want to bring it with us!”

 

            Jack nodded to Ianto. “Exactly. You were severely affected by something in that thing.” He sat back. “I don’t even know what the red stones are but you simply brushed your fingers over one and got kicked back on your arse. Can you tell us what happened?”

 

            “Visions… past, future, maybe? Do you know a planet with two suns, silvery trees, big snow-covered mountains, where the evening sky turns orange?” The shocked looks he got from Jack, Martha, and John stopped him cold. “What?”

 

            “That really and truly does fucking tear it,” said John. He slid the folder in front of him to Jack. “Here’s what you asked for, but don’t bother. Let me tell you a story instead, the creation story of a very primitive people, whose sky is dominated by a massive star forever collapsing into itself, but forever in balance. They tell of a deity named A’Nethisi, Mother Death, who sailed the stars with a companion, The One, seeding life and death as she passed. She traveled in a living red-gold ship and was served by living metal. A’Nethisi was pursued by a rogue-god who wanted her power. They fought on the event horizon of the star.  When she realized she would be defeated, she sailed her ship into the star, where they were compressed into a red diamond the size of a man’s head. The One retrieved the diamond and fled to the ends of the Universe.  Believers are still waiting for A’Nethisi’s return.”

 

            “Damn. Damn. Damn.’ Jack jumped up. “John, hack every database you can think of; you have free rein. Just try not to get us outlawed, ok? Martha, fire up your magic phone and get a hold of our friend. I don’t care where he is and what he is doing. I want to know everything there is to know about this A’Nethisi. Gwen, I need you here to co-ordinate. I have a feeling this is going to get really, really worse before it gets better. Isabella, you will stay here. You are our one and only expert on this thing, so you’re in security lockdown. Ianto…”

 

            “I’m going with you, Jack. I know we had agreed… but it seems I’m involved whether I want to or not.”

 

            “Fair enough.”

            “Jack.” The hint of panic in Andy’s voice had everyone jumping around. “I can’t raise Beckwith. In fact I can’t raise anyone. All the police phones in Cardiff are dead.”

 
 
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[identity profile] off-the-post18.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 05:30 pm (UTC)
This is getting better and better with each chapter. :) I can't wait to see what happens, especially when our friend with the blue box gets involved. :D

Keep writing!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 07:26 pm (UTC)
Well, the friend with the blue box... we'll see. Thanks for the encouragement. It keeps me going!
[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 05:34 pm (UTC)
This is absolutely brilliant!!!!!!

I adore the complexity here! You've woven a great story and I adore seeing Jack treating Ianto as an equal - not like he would have 20 years ago!!

I love it!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I have consciously been trying to write them as equals, show how much they have both grown in their attitudes towards each other. I mean, normal intelligent people don't stay the same from the ir twenties to their forties!
[identity profile] nyjen-nejen.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
Ohhh how very intresting!

When is the next update, cos i might have to catch up later cos i'm off on holiday for 2 weeks on sunday
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 07:29 pm (UTC)
Next update will probably be Sunday, unfortunately. I'm off on my other life (photography) tomorrow. Don't worry. It'll be waiting -- a treat, I hope -- when you get back!
[identity profile] 42footprints.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 06:11 pm (UTC)
Fantastic! Oh I can't wait until our mutual friend gets involved. Loved seeing Ianto standing up to Isabella too :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 07:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Let's see what happens with our mutual friend... And I'm trying very consciously to make Ianto an adult with adult reactions. I HATE woobie!Ianto with a passion.
[identity profile] tanarian.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 07:42 pm (UTC)
I swear to God I am having a hissy-fit every time I get to the end of a chapter! This is just sooooo complex and well thought out and I love the intermingling of Egyptian myth with SF (and done much more sympathetically and believably than in a certain American SF show - sorry, long-standing grudge there *cough).

Oh hell, when is the next update? Ten minutes, maybe? Looks hopeful. (Don't kill Davies and Mrs Bolton, though. Please?)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 08:11 pm (UTC)
Sorry. One of the two's a goner. Update probably tomorrow or sunday.
[identity profile] tanarian.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
Waaah! Damn. Oh well, fifty per cent mortality rate is better than my usual scoring, I suppose...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 01:44 pm (UTC)
You'll like the outcome. I guarantee it!
[identity profile] tanarian.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 07:11 pm (UTC)
*looks hopeful* Really?
[identity profile] gypsylady.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 08:12 pm (UTC)
I am loving this. Keep it up!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 25th, 2008 08:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] observer3.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 02:14 pm (UTC)
I am enjoying the complexity of the story. In particular I like the 'team' you have assembled! It seems like John is behaving for once. The pairing of Jack and Ianto is wonderful. It is lovely Ianto in a position where he has come into his own! Looking forward to the next chapter
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 04:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Next "chapter" up tomorrow, G*d willing and the creek don't rise...
[identity profile] sal101010.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! This is great, can't wait for more...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 26th, 2008 04:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on July 27th, 2008 07:08 am (UTC)
This is just brilliant!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 27th, 2008 01:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Comments are inspiration!
Auresse[personal profile] auresse on July 28th, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
doun da da daaaaa-----

Okayyyy.... *leg jiggles* :gots butterflies:

SUSPENSE! TENSION! This goes waaayyy beyond cliffhanger... this is brilliant(though agonizing)plotting.

This is nail biting, gripping, sweaty palms stuff!

Fantastic!!!
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[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com on August 5th, 2008 08:04 pm (UTC)
Oh crap...I'm not sure what's going on but it can't be good. All the mythology stuff is really interesting...have to admit I'm a sucker for stuff like that :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 5th, 2008 08:25 pm (UTC)
*evil grin*
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 07:49 am (UTC)
oooh, good stuff! I love the myth you created for A’Nethisi very compelling.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 11:05 am (UTC)
Backstory was essential here...