Oh, Rhys, you are my hero! You've made him so real, so human, so much the equal of Gwen - I love that about your writing. He's right about his boys, as well he should be, and it's brilliant to hear him taking responsibility and avoiding it in equal measures!

The whisky in the globe? Lovely touch :)

As for Jane, she's shaping up to be *really* interesting! Only on more part? *pouts* I'll go and read it now!