14 July 2011 @ 08:09 pm
Coming Attraction: Becoming Human  
If you are wondering why it's been taking me so long to finish Angel of Death, this is why. I blame [personal profile] bethmccombs , with all the talk of Criminal Minds. She did this to me. It's her fault, I tell you!

Now that I know where I'm going with this, more or less, I can get back to business. But as soon as Angel is finished....

Becoming Human

As his body falls through the Time Lock he looks back and sees him die. He sees him trade his life for an old man with maybe one more decade left in him, feels the pain and the sorrow tearing through him, and it makes him so angry that he pushes back against the chronon tide, throwing everything he is against it.

Astonishingly, it gives way and he slips through, screaming in agony as his body is torn away and he’s sucked down Earth’s gravity well. In desperation he searches for something – someone – to cushion his fall. He’s not hard to find. The freak’s life signature is like a million million suns compressed into a diamond, and he had a year to study each single facet. It amuses him to think of living inside one of his favorite pets, immortality assured, no final death, ever.

He laughs, but the laugh turns to a scream when he finally sees what lies at the heart of the diamond. The wolf slaps him aside with a negligent swipe of the paw, and he is flung into darkness.

And then the sound comes.

Even though now he knows what it is, he still cringes when he hears it. He tries to cover his ears, shut it out, but it is inside him, and he moans in terror. Suddenly the wolf is there, its Vortex-eyes examining him, digging into each thought, each dream, each life. The paw comes up again but instead of a blow there's a caress.

“For his sake,” she says. “Go. Live.”

He is plunged into a maelstrom of fire. Everything burns away, everything is stripped from him. He is reduced to thought and dream. He swears his revenge and the wolf laughs. This time, the paw connects with what in a physical body would be the side of his head.

When he awakens, he is in a strange city. Sirens are ringing in the distance. He looks up to see charred paper float down. He catches a piece in his hand. He sees the blood in his palm, feels it running from his ears. Something, maybe a sound, makes him turn. A car is on fire. Suddenly the noise is loud and it send knives stabbing into his eardrums.

A young, bearded man runs up to him. “Sir, are you all right?”

He struggles to understand and decides not to. “What's your name?”

“What?”

“What's your name?” he insists.

“Sam.”

“Call 911. Call 911 and tell them there's been an explosion".

 
 
 
 
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bethmccombs: The Master - Smug Look[personal profile] bethmccombs on July 15th, 2011 12:30 am (UTC)
Me? You're blaming me? Sweet, innocent me!?! *pouts*

More... like yesterday... or I'll get out the wet noodles. *smirk*
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on July 15th, 2011 12:17 pm (UTC)
Yes you!
bethmccombs: Star Trek - Only One Plot Tribble[personal profile] bethmccombs on July 15th, 2011 04:28 pm (UTC)
*pouts* *hides stuff for other story*
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on July 15th, 2011 05:24 pm (UTC)
Don't you dare!
bethmccombs[personal profile] bethmccombs on July 15th, 2011 05:25 pm (UTC)
*hides notes* *blinks innocently*
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on July 15th, 2011 05:28 pm (UTC)
I mean don't you dare hide them!
bethmccombs: Criminal Minds - Reid (S4)[personal profile] bethmccombs on July 15th, 2011 05:29 pm (UTC)
*pouts* I didn't hide a thing... really I didn't... those really aren't your notes sticking out from under my pile of notes... really they ain't. *grin*
kendermaus[personal profile] kendermaus on July 15th, 2011 01:50 am (UTC)
I... ::reads again:: It... ::reads a third time::

HUM.

Just... HUM.

this... could be interesting.

hum.

the (curious... and a touch worried ::grin::) kendermouse
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on July 15th, 2011 12:17 pm (UTC)
Be worried.... be very worried.... :D
faithharkness: Sleepy Reid[personal profile] faithharkness on July 15th, 2011 04:33 pm (UTC)
Bwah hahahahahaha! Welcome to the CM fandom. We have chocolate chip cookies and Spencer Reid, who is like a little black dress-he goes with everyone.

And I cannot freaking WAIT for this.
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on July 15th, 2011 05:25 pm (UTC)
It's... an interesting head trip, since I have only written Torchwood and the NCIS crossover. I know the first part of this -- but there might be others.... aaaaiiiiiieeeeeee! The bunnies! The bunnies!
faithharkness[personal profile] faithharkness on July 15th, 2011 05:43 pm (UTC)
Ah, yes, the bunnies. And Thrace keeps feeding mine glitter!!
bethmccombs: Criminal Minds - Reid (S5)[personal profile] bethmccombs on July 15th, 2011 05:27 pm (UTC)
Ain't he just? *smirk* And apparently this is my fault... I suppose I should go back to my own Criminal Minds story now before you come tracking me down?
faithharkness: Leto II[personal profile] faithharkness on July 15th, 2011 05:45 pm (UTC)
I'll give you a reprieve, as I have been told by people I fear and respect that if I am caught reading fic before I finish up some deadline-fics I have, dire things will happen to me. Like the confiscation of precious, precious DVDs.
bethmccombs[personal profile] bethmccombs on July 15th, 2011 05:46 pm (UTC)
Darn! *grin* I was hoping for comments from you.
faithharkness[personal profile] faithharkness on July 15th, 2011 05:46 pm (UTC)
I will bookmark for later, promise! But bookwrm will skin me alive if I don't have my Ladyhawke fic to her for betaing soon, as I have been teasing with excerpts for weeks!
ruadh[personal profile] ruadh on July 15th, 2011 09:11 pm (UTC)
I loved it! :-)
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on July 16th, 2011 05:05 pm (UTC)
thank you! As I've said before , it's... odd.
http://ravenja1170.livejournal.com/[identity profile] ravenja1170.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2011 07:27 pm (UTC)
Criminal Minds plus/versus The Master ... This sounds intriguing! :)
Merucha[personal profile] merucha on September 14th, 2011 01:13 am (UTC)
I do hope so but I've got some things to finish first!