18 July 2009 @ 01:35 pm
Torchwood Fic: Fallout, Part Three (CoE spoilers!!!)  
Title: Fallout, Part Three
Author: Emma
Characters: A whole bunch of folk.
Rating: Starts PG, but hey, it’s got Jack in it!
Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?
Author’s Note: This is Series 3 Fix-it Fic. I dreamed this. It embarrasses me, because, dammit, Series 3 didn’t happen!
Author's Note: Just to make me feel better, I'm going to try an experiment. Short scenes, little narrative, mostly dialog. Let's see what happens.

Part One is here; Part Two is here

            “He’s very different.”

 

            Gwen rested her forehead on Jack’s shoulder. “He’s his own person. It’s the only thing that makes it bearable.”

 

            “I think I like the ponytail and beard look. The muscles don’t hurt, either.” His attempt at behaving like his old self ended in a sob. “Gwen, what’s he like?”

 

            “Crisp. Abrupt. No shadows or secrets.” Gwen wiped her eyes. “Excels at all forms of combat, armed or unarmed. Learns incredibly fast. Adapts and improvises even faster.”

 

            “The perfect soldier.”

 

            “That’s what John thinks.” She went back to her desk, leaving Jack standing by the glass wall, looking down at Ifan and the Doctor. “Here’s his full report. He’s the one who insisted we get you back.”

 

            “You didn’t want me back, Gwen?”

 

            She hesitated briefly. “Last week Andy and I were having an argument about something. Ifan made a smartarse crack and rolled his eyes at us. For a moment it was like having Ianto back and it hurt so much I nearly burst into tears.”

 

            “Gwen…”

 

            “At first, I would have done anything to have you back. But I had time to think. You paid for the human race’s survival with your blood and your heart, Jack. What right do we have to ask you for more?” She rubbed her knuckles over her eyes. “Martha tried to call the Doctor but couldn’t get through.”

 

            “So I’m your last resort.” Maybe he should have been angry, but all Jack could feel was gratitude. “I like what you’ve done here. You’ve built a good team.”

 

            “It was touch and go for a while.”

 

            “John told me. Recruiting locals would have gone a long way to soothe folk. Although Kathy Swanson was kind of a surprise.”

 

            “Andy helped me convince her. I think she has ambitions to take over Torchwood London and clean out the muck.”

 

            “I wonder if she’ll want any help.”

 

            They grinned at each other.

 

            “I’ll move back to my own workstation today.” Gwen said. “We’ll need to get you introduced around. There are some…”

 

            Jack raised his hand to stop the flow. “No. I’ll only be here for a long as it takes to straighten out this mess. You’re the head of Torchwood Cardiff and that’s as it should be.”

 
 
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ext_116536: Sentiments - Reality Failure[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 06:25 pm (UTC)
I like that character list there... "a whole bunch of folk". Made me smile. This is going well, I'm curious as to what happens next.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 10:08 pm (UTC)
The truth is, when I started writing I didn't know where I was going, so... I couldn't figure out who would play a part in it!
ext_116536: Sentiments - Canon Error[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 10:12 pm (UTC)
LOL. That happens, but it's still a good cast list.
rhianona: Captain Jack[personal profile] rhianona on July 18th, 2009 06:58 pm (UTC)
love the little hints of what is going on. Should be fun to learn more.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's interesting,letting the dialogue do the work.
[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 07:46 pm (UTC)
Oh I felt for Gwen here ...and interesting that Ifan has some of Ianto's mannerisms...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
Gwen is one of the good guys in this fic... and of course Ifan does... wait a bit...
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 07:52 pm (UTC)
Interesting and Making Ifan the perfect solider and having a bit of this and that.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 10:09 pm (UTC)
There's a reason for it... but you knew that!
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 11:11 pm (UTC)
Yay for Kathy!
Like the way that you get accross how different - but also how similar - Ifan is to Ianto.

Sets up camp, waiting for the next part.

And if anyone wants to join me, I have marshmallows...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 18th, 2009 11:30 pm (UTC)
At the beginning the difference is essential...
[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com on July 19th, 2009 11:13 am (UTC)
MARSHMALLOWS? :D

*Sets up right away*

Hey, you want a fire going? :D I can do fire. I like fire.
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on July 19th, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC)
A fire would be lovely, thank you. Fire and marshmallows are a match made in Heaven.

*settles in to toast marshmallows*



Edited 2009-07-19 04:17 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on July 19th, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)
Aww, poor Gwen but it sounds like she's done a great job
and Kathy!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 19th, 2009 03:53 am (UTC)
Gwen is one of the good guys in this one!
[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com on July 19th, 2009 11:16 am (UTC)
My absolute favourite fic of all time (well, one of them) was a Kathy!fic, so this has just increased it's 'AWESOME DUDE!' potential value by about a zillion percent.

And he's the perfect soldier... hmmm.

Is it twisted that the only thing this leads to in my mind is John and him talking dirty soldier talk in bed?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 19th, 2009 12:40 pm (UTC)
I'm thinking Kathy!fic myself -- my idea book is getting a workout... And I understand your mind completely! :D




Edited 2009-07-19 12:41 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] gingerlr.livejournal.com on July 24th, 2009 09:53 pm (UTC)
*thud*

You recruited KATHY SWANSON!!!!

I love you. Seriously. I love you.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 24th, 2009 11:38 pm (UTC)
You just wait!