16 August 2009 @ 12:56 pm
Torchwood Fic: Everything Changes (2/4)  

Title: Everything Changes, Part Two of Four

Author: Emma

Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.

Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Summary: Constable Gwen Cooper is drawn into the dark world of the Queen’s Magicians.

Author’s Note: I have been bitten by a radioactive plot bunny that threatened to disintegrate my cells if I didn’t do this. No. I don’t know if I will do all the episodes, though it would be fun. We’ll see.

Author's Note: This is a retelling of the Torchwood episodes in a world in which there are no aliens and magic and the supernatural are very real. For all of you history nerds, the Synod of Whitby went the other way and the majority of the northern English, Scots, Welsh, and Irish are Celtic Christians.

Author’s Note: I like to thank RTD for the inspiration (/snark)


Part One is here

            “Cooper!”

 

            Gwen set down the tray of empty tea mugs she was carrying. “Yes, sir!”

 

            “Some old… lady got her purse grabbed outside her local Tesco. Got roughed up a bit and she’s kicking up a fuss. Insists on filing a report.” The Sergeant’s eyes glittered with malice. “She’s at Cardiff Royal. Go over and take it down, there’s a good girl.”

 

            She was damned if she gave him the pleasure of seeing her upset. Smiling her highest-wattage smile, she saluted him. “Yes, sir!”

 

            As she passed Andy’s desk she caught his eye. His approving nod made her smile. Suddenly she remembered something Andy had told her a few months before: Eric Kenyon’s gone as high as he ever will and all the boot licking in the world won’t change that, and what’s worse, he knows it.  Andy had a gift for putting things, and people, in perspective.

 

            The drive to the Cardiff Royal Infirmary was an easy one in the light mid-morning traffic. She used the time to prepare herself. Kenyon knew she was a medium; sending her to a place full of the dead and dying was an act of petty cruelty, but at the same time it revealed his appalling ignorance of basic psychical science. The first and most important test of the Spiritual Certification Court was to measure the ability of a Sensitive’s mind to withstand a supernatural assault. For a medium to receive her Bishop’s Certificate she had to be able to filter out the voices of the dead in a graveyard or a battlefield at full moon. A modern hospital was a piece of cake in comparison.

 

            Taking the statement was a bit time consuming. Mrs. Alder was a garrulous soul. On the other hand she was sharp as a new pin and gave an excellent description of her attackers. Gwen didn’t have the heart to tell her nobody was going to go out of their way to find them.

 

            As she left the A&E  she caught sight of a familiar coat. Captain Harkness was standing half-way up the stairs leading to the first floor, talking to a doctor that seemed just about ready to burst into tears. She couldn’t hear what they were saying but it was obvious from the fast, high-pitched whine of what would naturally have been a gravelly baritone that the doctor had had a bad shock.  He gesticulated wildly upwards as he spoke. Captain Harkness finally resorted to grabbing his hands and holding them still. The action seemed to calm the man a little. The Captain waited for a few seconds more then started to speak, slowly and evenly. The doctor hiccupped to a standstill then nodded once or twice as Captain Harkness spoke.

 

            At some moment Gwen realized that she was aware of another presence. A man stood behind and slightly to one side of the Captain. She couldn’t understand how she had missed him, because he had the kind of looks that would attract the eye of any woman, nine to ninety. He was very young, and had the elegant, fey looks of one of the Fair Folk; standing next to Captain Harkness he played a counterpoint of light to dark. He was a human as she was, and living, not dead, yet it seemed to her that he had appeared out of nowhere.  He whispered something and the Captain nodded. Tapping his earpiece, the man spoke briefly to someone, then whispered again to the Captain.

 

            Captain Harkness released the doctor’s hands and he and the young man continued up the stairs. The doctor called out to them, and the Captain turned to answer. Gwen knew the moment he picked her out from the crowd in the lobby. His eyes lit up, and he gave her a slow, sensual smile. Then he spun around and continued up the stairs, taking the steps two at a time.

 

            Impulsively, Gwen started up after him. The Infirmary was designed as a hollow square, with each floor looking down on the central courtyard and its Roman-style pluvium filled with blooming water lilies. Captain Harkness and the young man ran to the third floor and disappeared behind a door with an airlock seal on it.

 

            She waited a few minutes and then followed them. The corridor beyond the door smelt of fresh paint. She wondered what the two men were looking for in an empty area obviously undergoing renovation. Walking down the corridor she peered into a few rooms but they were empty except for equipment and boxes piled up haphazardly in the middle of the floor. They had disappeared on her. She was about to give up when she noticed a man in a boiler suit, likely a worker, standing at the far end.

 

            “Excuse me, sir?”

 

            He turned  to her and Gwen flinched and bit back a scream. The man was wearing a fright mask like those Christian children wore on their Halloween festival. He seemed as scared by her as she was by him. He ran down a narrow corridor that branched to the right of the main one, moving in a half-crouch like an ape. Gwen ran after him, trying to remember if the Infirmary had a Psychiatric Intensive Care Unit.

           As they reached a turn in the corridor, a security guard stepped out from one of the rooms right in front of the fleeing man. "W
hoa, mate. What’s the hurry? Are you…”

 

            Gwen watched in horror as the masked man struck the guard across the throat. Blood gushed out. The guard dropped the keys he was carrying and grabbed at the wound as it to stop the blood, then toppled backwards. His killer then turned back to Gwen, snarling, his whole front spattered red.

 

            “Look,” she started to speak, trying her best to keep her voice from shaking, as she backed away slowly. “You need help. He needs help. Let me call someone, all right?”

 

            Suddenly the young man was there, standing directly behind the masked man. He was carrying an active stunner in his hand. At the same time, Gwen was yanked out of the way and found herself tumbling into the folds of a World War Two military coat.

 

            “Hello, Gwen Cooper.” The satisfied purr in his voice made every nerve in her body strum. “What are you doing here?”

 

            She tried to answer but found his finger across her lips.

 

            “Don’t say anything. This is the second time you’ve spied on me, Gwen Cooper. Now let’s see if your detective skills are as good as your stalking ones. Find me, Gwen. Find Torchwood.”

 

            She heard an amused snort behind her, and turned to see the young man smiling wryly. The man in the mask lay on the ground, breathing heavily, hands cuffed behind his back.

 

            “But remember one thing, Gwen Cooper. If you find us, you’re ours.”


Edited for typos. Thanks, guys!
 
 
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[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 05:17 pm (UTC)
Ooh interesting Ianto went with Jack to the hospital, and I like how if Gwen finds them she would be working with them.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 05:19 pm (UTC)
I'm going to do some things very differently here. I will follow the outline of the epis but not the details, which in some cases aggravated me no end. And yes, Gwen has choices to make...
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 05:22 pm (UTC)
Oh cool.

Also that Leverage/TW:COE crossover muses are starting to perk up because I have a making of a backstory piece on how Tosh and Hardison meet.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:08 pm (UTC)
That's fantastic!
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:15 pm (UTC)
Yep, and the brain is contemplating other scenes.
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 05:52 pm (UTC)
Love, love, love the description of Ianto as "fey". It's so fitting. Love this, absolutely loving the way this is developing.

Oh, you have a typpo, unless it's intentional... you dropped an "o" in Torchwood.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks! He is fey some moments,isn't he? And thanks for the catch!
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:27 pm (UTC)
Another typo - this one made me smile Gwen didn’t have the hart to tell her I'm presuming it *isn't* intentional...

Really enjoying this retelling btw.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 07:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you! That's what happens when you proofread while drinking rum and coke! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC)
He is indeed. And you're welcome!
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 05:55 pm (UTC)
Oooh i'm loving your angle on this and i so can't wait to see what you do with the rest ... i hope you do do all the episodes.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks! As for all the episodes... it's tempting...
[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:34 pm (UTC)
Ianto always seemed very Fey to me ... and I love Jack enticing Gwen ... these re-tellings really are fascinating.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 07:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's My Very Own Torchwood *nods*
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:39 pm (UTC)
Really like this update and adore the description of Ianto and with the way he seems to appear out of nowhere makes me even more curious about him
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 07:13 pm (UTC)
Oh he hs a history, our boy...
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 07:45 pm (UTC)
LOL! This does not suprise me and I suspect some understatement there :)
[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 06:39 pm (UTC)
wonderful update, loved that a lot and that last line actually sounds ominous
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 07:14 pm (UTC)
Well... you know Jack!
ext_41651: Ianto wants a pony[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 07:38 pm (UTC)
Lovely, I like the way this is going. Nice little appearance by Ianto, and I see it's likely that you will not underwrite him the way they did on screen.

I think Fey is kind of a good word for him, unfortunately it certainly has connotations now that don't fit with him, (certainly in Britain if you refer to a man as fey, you are calling him camp, waspish and probably sneaky, a little creepy even. ) I assume you mean it in a very pure sense.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:06 pm (UTC)
Really? I didn't know about that. I use fey in the way a pagan would do:

1
a. Having or displaying an otherworldly, magical, or fairylike aspect or quality: "She's got that fey look as though she's had breakfast with a leprechaun" (Dorothy Burnham).
b. Having visionary power; clairvoyant.
c. Appearing touched or crazy, as if under a spell.
2. Scots
a. Fated to die soon.
b. Full of the sense of approaching death.

Which might tell you something!!!
[identity profile] srah-scottydog.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:43 pm (UTC)
I didn't know about the pagan definitions, only the ones that make me think of Bilis Manger (or Angus in Sub Rosa, breaks my heart that that play isn't more well known), very interesting.

Please please please can I be there if you ever describe a ned as fey? Please? Lol!

I'm loving this to pieces. But you already know I love your fics, so there's nothing else to say really =P
ext_41651: not dead[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:45 pm (UTC)
Yes exactly, Bilis Manger...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:58 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you like it. It's a big departure for me because I am trying to follow a pre-set outline (the episode) but also doing it a little different...

Interesting about definitions. I've never known any other than the one I use here... I think at some point this will enter the conversation in the Hub... :D And, just for you, a hint: I'm using in the old Scots sense: full of the sense of approaching death...

Edited 2009-08-16 09:00 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] srah-scottydog.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
Oooh... OH!
I think I might... but I shall wait and see... Hmmm....
ext_41651: Ianto wants a pony[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:44 pm (UTC)
Oh yes, I remember chatting to a group of people a couple of years ago, and one of the guys described a man as fey. I then proceeded to have a disagreement with the whole group when they insisted this meant the man must be gay, and also camp. I think it has lost the meaning that you have, I had to say, no it doesn't quite mean that, and we then got into this big discussion, but I don't think I convinced them. I think here someone like Peter Mandelson (Lord Mandelson) would be called Fey. He is also nicknamed the Prince of Darkness, he is gay, and the type of man who would simply raise an eyebrow to intimidate you, also very very powerful, runs the government even though he doesn't officially. So it's like part of the meaning is still there.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 09:00 pm (UTC)
Yeah, it's meaning slide... happens with a lot of words.
[identity profile] criccieth.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:08 pm (UTC)
interesting. Enjoying the subtle differences, and the shift in the meaning of Gwen as the "heart" of Torchwood.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 16th, 2009 08:25 pm (UTC)
I have SWORN to write Gwen right... at least the way I think she should have been written...
[identity profile] wreath-of-roses.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 01:20 am (UTC)
I like the differences from the show. The first glimpse of Ianto is well written and adds more mystery to his character. And Jack actually acting compassionate and understanding to a witness was a nice touch. I like the fact that Gwen is there on a follow up to a mugging, and didn't just swan off on her own leaving Andy to fend for himself. I hope to see Gwen developed into the character she should've been, instead of what we got on the show. *shudders*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 03:02 am (UTC)
I have decided that Gwen is going to be an adult in this one if it kills her! I'm glad you're liking this.
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 02:23 am (UTC)
Yes!! Perfect. Absolutely freaking perfect. Oooooh this is going to be so much fun!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 03:03 am (UTC)
Thank you! I think so too.
[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 10:25 am (UTC)
Ooohh Brilliant!!
Ianto + fey = perfect!
I can't wait to see more of Jack and Ianto in this :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 12:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 01:28 pm (UTC)
That last line should SO have been put in the acutal episode. loving this more and more.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 02:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] samstjames.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
This is really nice. Fascinating approach to a very unique Torchwood and well written. If you carry on you might create your own popular TW-verse ;).
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 17th, 2009 02:32 pm (UTC)
If you carry on you might create your own popular TW-verse ;). If I do it will confirm my dad's oft-expressed belief that I do my best work when I'm mad like a hornet. This is my response to RTD's "go watch Supernatural" crack.