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Merucha ([personal profile] merucha) wrote2009-08-31 11:58 pm

Fallout, Part TwentySeven

Title: Fallout, Part TwentySeven

Author: Emma

Characters: A whole bunch of folk.

Rating: Starts PG, but hey, it’s got Jack in it!

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?
Author's Note: This fic is CoE compliant


Part One is here; Part Two is here; Part Three is here; Part Four is here; Part Five is here; Part Six is here; Part Seven is here; Part Eight is here; Part Nine is here; Part Ten is here; Part Eleven is here; Part Twelve is here; Part Thirteen is here; Part Fourteen is here; Part Fifteen is here; Part Sixteen is here; Part Seventeen is here; Part Eighteen is here; Part Nineteen is here; Part Twenty is here; Part TwentyOne is here; Part TwentyTwo is here; Part TwentyThree is here; Part TwentyFour is here; Part TwentyFive is here; Part TwentySix is here


            “Jack, we need to find Donna.”

 

            “Hello, Doctor, nice to see you again,” Jack said with exaggerated politeness. “What can Torchwood do for you?”

 

            “Are you trying to be funny? The TARDIS keeps saying that there’s another Time Lord on Earth. When I remind her of the Master, she shows me an energy signature that I’ve never seen before. And the only other person on Earth who could… ouch!" The smack on the back of the head had him whirling around. “Donna?”

 

            “Who did you think it would be, you skinny Martian?”

 

            He swept her into a tight hug, his eyes misty. “Oh, Donna.” As realization struck, he put her down, pushing her away enough to examine her. “How?”

 

            “Yan found a way.” Jack said. “She’s fine. Memories intact but no Time Lord knowledge.”

 

            “But the only way he could have done that is if…” He felt the presence behind him and turned slowly, on his heels, hand on his pockets. “Ah. The TARDIS was right.”

 

            “Yes and no.”  Yan made a face. “I’m… Frankenstein’s monster.”

 

            “Yan!”

 

            “Oi! Don’t talk about yourself like that!”

 

            The Doctor grinned at Yan. “It seems you have defenders. But in this instance, they’re right, you know. From the genetic standpoint, everyone is a bit of a Frankenstein monster anyway. It’s the mind that matters, especially for us.”

 

            “Us?”

 

            “Well, you have one heart and you’re mortal and you’re not likely to get your own TARDIS… but in every other way… welcome to the clan.” He grabbed Ifan’s hand, shook it enthusiastically, then dropped it as another thought distracted him. “Um… I have to talk to Martha.”

 

            “She’s on her way.” Ifan said. “I asked her to come.”

 

            “Oh?”

 

            “I’ve been… sorting through the stuff in my head. I did not mean to invade your privacy, Doctor. Not that you left behind a great deal of personal information, but there was some.”

 

            The Doctor smiled. “I trust you to keep my secrets, Ifan.”

 

            Martha walked in and threw her arms around the Doctor, who hugged her back enthusiastically.

 

            “Martha,” Ifan said, “I know you’ve been doing some research on the methods the Master used to splice my genes together.”

 

            “Yes. Human and Gallifreyan genes are so different that there should be no possibility of a proper splice with current technology. I examined the equipment, and it’s top of the line, but it’s the stuff currently used in fertility clinics with some minor alterations. There is no way the Master should have done what she did.”

 

            Ifan started to say something to her, then turned to the Doctor. “I’m sorry Doctor but I need to ask you something. My memories show you… were a father once.”

 

            “Yes.”

 

            There was something ominous in the single syllable, but Ifan continued. “And grandchildren. You had grandchildren?”

 

            “I am not so young and patient as I once was, Mister Jones.”

 

            Ifan took a deep breath as if trying to steady himself. “My four times great grandmother came to Wales as a refugee. There was a war in her country and her husband had been killed. She was pregnant.”

 

            The Doctor had grown very pale. “Ifan?”

 

            “She named her son Ifan, which is Welsh for John because she said her grandfather sometimes went by it. She never told anyone much else, except that it had taken her a long time to get to Wales.” He took another breath. “She made sure at least one or two men in each generation carried a variation of the name. She died at one hundred and twenty five, a revered elder of her family and her community.”

 

            “Ifan?”

 

            “Her name was Susan Foreman.”

edited to make something a little less confusing. i was getting too cute with the names!

[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
YAY its back.

I loved the banter between everyone and bring in Susan Foreman into it awesome.

Also wee typo “She’s on his way.”
Shouldn't it be She's on her way.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the catch! I'm reaching my "awake" limit tonight! And the credit for Susan Foreman goes to [livejournal.com profile] beth_mccombs. We were talking about something totally disconnected with this and then something she said... boom.

[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
We were talking about something totally disconnected with this and then something she said... boom.

It worked well.
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[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
You know that 'boom'... you should come see the fallout from it on my end! *whimpers*
rhianona: (first doctor and susan)

[personal profile] rhianona 2009-09-01 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
SUSAN! One of my favorite companions, ever.

Explains so much, doesn't it? Now, I wonder how the Master discovered that little tidbit of information...

Happy to see this updated.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
You'll find out how he did a little later... Ifan was getting a little testy with me about it, so I worked on it last night. There should be another one soon...

[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oh very cool!
Another spanner to throw into the works :D

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I looove spanners!

[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
I'm speachless........
(And extremely happy that you updated this!!!)
Still speachless.....

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, good or bad speechless?? :D

[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
By now you should know it: very good spechless ;-)

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 09:00 am (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeeeee! Susan! Bloody hell! Cue gobsmacked Doctor!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes. She came out of nowhere, even for me!

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
And she always seemed just a little bit odd too - perfect for a relation of Ianto/Ifan!

[identity profile] sal101010.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 10:21 am (UTC)(link)
When he welcomes Franken!Yan to the clan, did he mean to shake Ianto's hand or Ifan's hand? I am struggling to keeep up with all the different personalities, but I did think that he's still Ifan/Yan at the moment!

Other than that, loved it as usual and yay, Susan!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, he's both, but I agree that's confusing so I've changed it. I'm gld you're enjoying it!
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[personal profile] bk_forever 2009-09-01 11:03 am (UTC)(link)
My brain's going. I just glanced at the first line and read "Jack, we need to feed Donna." Ooops! Not reading this series yet, but I will get around to it, I promise! I'm just in the middle of reading so many series right now, I'm getting confused.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, they will do that in the next part... :D
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[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my... and I thought my end of the explosion of inspiration was interesting! This is quite intriguing.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'll be on tonight. It's been a crazy morning.
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[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Sounds like a plan... and I know what you mean.

[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*points and Squreeeees at Susan*
Lovely dialogue in this - there's more twists than a macramé belt, it's fantastic

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I specialize in odd twists, because I have a really odd mind! :D

[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Odd = Interesting, odd minds are even more fun!

[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com 2009-09-01 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my gosh ---- Susan!!!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep. Susan. Blame Beth! :D

[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
You know... I am *really* glad you listen to your dreams and write them down for all of us to enjoy :) this is nifty!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! That's a nifty icon, btw; I've been listening to Gareth read H.P. Lovecraft while I write Hungry Heart.

[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
oooh... Gareth reading Lovecraft, now that has to be fun! And inspirational :)
ext_41651: Ianto shiny with mobile (blam blam)

[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Gosh. Now are you saying that Ianto's grandmother was Susan Foreman??

I'm so glad to see this update, I've been worrying about Ifan. Now you have left us with a cliffie, so I hope we get more soon.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-02 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
great-great-great-great grandmother. Yep.