28 March 2010 @ 03:48 pm
An Update and a Peek into the Fiction Future  
I have been working on the last two parts of End of Days and the next chapter of Adaptation. But in the meantime, something new has come up. You know how some things just won't leave you alone? Well, this won't.  So I thought I would give you a little glimpse into the next series of stories. This is actually, completely canonical...but as usual, nothing is what/where it seems. Let me know what you think.


Title: Great Loves
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, the Doctor, others
Ratings: Oh, please. As if you didn't know
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money, yadda yadda

Absence diminishes small loves and increases great ones, as the wind blows out the candle and fans the bonfire. François Duc de La Rochefoucauld 

Prologue

Nebthet Island, on the Planet of the Phoenix, seventh from the double suns of Alpha Comae, in the constellation of Coma Berenice, on the tenth year of the fifth century of the Second Diaspora of Man.

The monastery of Our Compassionate Lady of the Blessed Brilliance sheltered under the massive overhang of the canyon wall, next to the rushing waters of the Apis river. The water pushed the paddles of the four-story wheel next to the mill where all the local farmers ground their corn and wheat in exchange for providing the monks with flour for their bread. A short climb up the canyon the monastery gardens burst with fruits and vegetables to feed a dozen different races and metabolisms. Under the stone roof provided by the canyon, individual cells surrounded a vast central hall that served as refectory, library, and study. A short distance away, a second building served as infirmary and jail when necessary.

The ancient place had more in common with a research library than a religious house; the Lady did not demand your allegiance, only your brains. Scholars came to Nebthet to study and then returned to their own worlds to teach, taking with them the subtle training they were not really even aware they were getting: think for yourself... follow the line of reasoning wherever it might lead... apply your conclusions... fight if you must, but teach when you can... Of those that applied each year, only a handful were chosen, carefully selected with an eye to their cultural matrix as well as their own abilities and talents. The monks had pursued their mission for over fifteen hundred years and thousands of scholars had taken their message across the stars.

Brother Dewydd adjusted his cowl as he walked across the lawn towards the library entrance. He was something of a celebrity in the community, and residents discreetly pointed him out to newcomers as he passed. Legend had it that he had been there at the founding of the monastery during the Bloody Years between the Diasporas; in fact, some of the documents in the secure cases in the Scriptorium seemed to suggest that he had been the driving force behind it. It was hard to believe, since he looked no more than thirty nine or forty Earth years, his dark hair innocent of gray and his skin unlined and supple. But sometimes there was a look in his blue eyes that belied that youthful appearance, an unfathomable sadness that spoke of centuries of grief and loss, and in those moments even the most skeptical was willing to believe.

The monk noticed the attention with amusement. It was the same every time the annual transport docked and thankfully it lasted only for as long as it took the scholars to get settled in and get to work. There were a few good prospects this year, especially the young woman from Hyssos. She was trained as a physicist and already had several solid achievements to her name. Whether they could break through the pompous arrogance of the upper-crust Hyssoni was still to be established, but he though there were some positive signs.

He shook his head as the song began again. It was more of a memory of a melody than anything he could recognize. He had found himself singing it in the shower earlier that morning and now could not get rid of it no matter how hard he tried. It wasn't quite human but it wasn't quite anything else either, but the sense of knowing nibbled at the edge of his consciousness. After the lecture he was going to spend some time at the Library terminals doing some research. He was sure that he could identify it even if he could only find a minute snatch of it.

As he passed the kitchen window, Abbot Lucas waved at him. The de facto head of the monastery insisted on taking his turn at all the menial tasks; he insisted keeping his hands busy allowed him to concentrate on things that needed thinking about. Dewydd envied his serenity, knowing that his own essentially impatient nature would never allow him that sort of relaxation.

When he reached the lecture hall he found it packed to the rafters. Usually he only taught the advanced students in groups of no more than six, but Lucas insisted that he give the welcome speech every year. Dewydd's demurrals were met with a stern glower that barely hid a grin. If we put you up front and let them stare at you for a while, the novelty will wear off and everything will go back to normal, he would say, and Dewydd could do nothing but grin and acquiesce.

He had done the speech hundreds of time, and he could do it in his sleep, so when the music started again even louder than before, he simply concentrated on letting the words flow. The soft melody was now accompanied with a gentle double beat, as if someone was beating two drums a half-step off unison. It made his own heart race and skip. He noticed that some among the audience were looking around. One, a g'Lally musician, was marking the rhythm on the arm of his chair, and he saw Lucas and his assistant Marianne come running into the room. He rubbed his chest hard, as if trying to keep his heart from leaping out.

And then it was there, and the crowd gasped in terrified awe. Tall,dressed all in black, its grey bald head ending in short curling tentacles where the nose and mouth would be in a human, its right hand holding its secondary brain. It was an Ood, a member of a race whose beginnings were hidden in the mystical Earliest Time, who moved through time and space at will, keeping themselves aloof from the rest, but sometimes reaching down to touch them, always with gentle kindness.

The Ood faced Brother Dewydd. “Captain Jack Harkness.”

Jack shook his head. “Not any longer. Not for millennia.”

“It is who you are.” The Ood reached with this other hand and pulled off Jack's cowl. “We have need of you, Jack Harkness. He has need of you.”

Jack did not need to ask who he was. He sighed bitterly. “And he only sends for me when he needs muscle.”

“He does not send for you, Jack Harkness. We looked into the past and understood that you were the only one who could help him.”

“What's wrong?”

“He is dying, Jack Harkness. The last of the Time Lords is dying, in the wrong time and place. And if he does, the Universe itself may fall into darkness.”



 
 
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[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 07:55 pm (UTC)
I am so hooked. Glad you fed this bunny. Will be looking forward to more
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC)
First I have to finish the other two, and have to tackle Charade! But the bunny would not be put off. Bit my ankles ALL night last night...
[identity profile] caz251.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 07:57 pm (UTC)
Ooh, very interesting, I'm looking forward to see where this is going to go.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you! So am I. In my usual way I have a beginning and and end and two pieces of the middle. The rest? Pfft. Plot. Who needs to plot? *panics*
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:55 pm (UTC)
I manage ok most of the time without a plot...
[identity profile] bookwrm89.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:00 pm (UTC)
OMG that sound fantastic! Can't wait to read more!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you! But first... unfinished business.
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:03 pm (UTC)
Oh, that looks very, very shiney! I'm really looking forward to this, its a really interesting set up.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:31 pm (UTC)
It's been nibbling at me for a while and finally last night it decided to chew on me big time!
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:38 pm (UTC)
ouch! *offers hot beverage in sympathy*
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:09 pm (UTC)
*sets up camp*

Looking forward to seeing more of this. I will supply your muses with as much chocolate as they need!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:32 pm (UTC)
I think on this one they're chomping at the bit to get going!
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:13 pm (UTC)
Ooh great start. Can't wait to read the rest of it
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:18 pm (UTC)
Ooh this looks interesting.

Love new stories from you.

I can't wait :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
I love new stories too. Just wish they would wait until the old ones are finished!
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:36 pm (UTC)
Believe me, you don't have to tell me about that. Verses, verses everywhere and each one veying for my attention - they are like children.
ext_116536: Writing - Attack of the Plot Tribbles[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:30 pm (UTC)
*sits down, glares, fondles whip* Okay, write faster!!!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
I am, I am!!!
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
I know... stop telling you to write faster and get back to work myself, yes?
Twincityhacker: Jack - Bigger on the inside[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 08:53 pm (UTC)
Our Compassionate Lady of the Blessed Brilliance wouldn't be St. Bad Wolf, would it? = D

And Jack can't quite give up the Welsh Connection. I'm really looking forward to this!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 09:35 pm (UTC)
Actually there's a quadruple pun in it. Yes, Bad Wolf for the Vortex, but also one of the meanings of Gwen is "blessed" and Toshiko means "brilliant child". And in Aramaic Martha means "lady," and of course she was a doctor. The sap named it for his beloved women.

And no, he can't. He picks Welsh names for himself to hide under... like I said, a romantic sap.

Edited 2010-03-28 09:36 pm (UTC)
Twincityhacker: Boeshane Peninsula[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 10:54 pm (UTC)
I was so busy giggling to myself over Monastery of St. Martha, St. Gwen, St. Toshiko, and St. Bad Wolf, I forgot to mention that I also love that Jack has been living in a monastery for a while. Because while on the surface it doesn't seem like it would work, it works great.

It's a community atmosphere, which suits Jack down to the ground, with simple living and a clear goal of making people's lives better. ( It's like the military, only more peace corps. )
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 12:07 am (UTC)
Well, I think of it as the Monastery of St. Rose, St. Toshiko, St. Gwen, and St. Martha, in the order in which he met them! *giggles*

And I have the sinking feeling that the Universe is not interested in Jack the Monk....

Edited 2010-03-29 12:08 am (UTC)
Twincityhacker: Welsh Space Program[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 06:08 am (UTC)
The Universe is tricky like that. = ( But if you ever need someone to squee over Jack the Monk, I am your woman.
[identity profile] adira-tam.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 10:09 pm (UTC)
sends carrots to the bunnies...leave Emma's ankles alone !!!

sounds great , can't wait
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 12:09 am (UTC)
Thank you! The little buggers are being obstreperous!
[identity profile] sarahjane6.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 10:12 pm (UTC)
I'm ready for more.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 12:10 am (UTC)
Well, I need to finish the other ones first! But the little impossible bastards won't leave me alone!
[identity profile] sarahjane6.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 01:41 am (UTC)
Well, I'll be here when you get to them. I think you do the best at blending au with canon. Very entertaining.

Did you ever finish your COE series of scenes? I've read them all and couldn't tell if it was going to continue or you were at a stopping part.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 03:06 am (UTC)
There's more of those coming. I'm putting up a master list of them soon. So far, there have been two complete stories. There will be a third to complete the arc.
[identity profile] huskyfriends.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 10:12 pm (UTC)
Oh dear sweet gods/goddesses/prophets/and every host of heaven! I love it! Keep the bunny nibbling, this has so much potential and I am hooked.

I have to catch up with reading, but I love it! Good job!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 12:11 am (UTC)
Thank you! But there are things to do first! Damnit, bunny!
[identity profile] huskyfriends.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 12:13 am (UTC)
I know the feeling! Between the fanfic, original fic, and tie-in fic I am hoping to pitch... Add in real life? The bunnies can be evil.

This might cheer you up, or not. When plotbunnies facepalm. (http://s334.photobucket.com/albums/m429/TheatreGirl79/Friends/?action=view&current=DSCI0262.flv)
[identity profile] otrame.livejournal.com on March 28th, 2010 11:36 pm (UTC)
*surreptitiously slips carrot to this bunny

You have me hooked. But, please don't leave Adaptation hanging.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 12:10 am (UTC)
No, I'm working on it, I promise!
rhianona: barbara and ian[personal profile] rhianona on March 29th, 2010 12:48 am (UTC)
Oh interesting... I like the set up so far. And like that Jack called the Doctor on the way he is usually treated.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 01:30 am (UTC)
He's SO MUCH older and achieved so much on his own -- I just realized that for Jack it's been almost twenty thousand years linear time since he's seen the doctor...
http://ravenja1170.livejournal.com/: springicon08 - cherry blossom[identity profile] ravenja1170.livejournal.com on March 29th, 2010 03:25 pm (UTC)
very, very interesting :-)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on March 30th, 2010 01:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you!