You know, I just noticed that yesterday and fixed some of it. I don't get it, because I don't see it at my end. I'll have to learn some more about this formatting thing. LJ seems to play games sometimes.

My first, absolute first fanfiction. I dreamed most of the story and then started to write it down, and it all flowed. The absolute hardest was getting the voices right. I was aging people, I didn't want them to be the same; intelligent people grow. But I also didn't want them to lose their character...
I can see why you have commented in your own stuff about getting voices right.