01 August 2008 @ 11:36 pm
Torchwood Fic: The Eye of Neith (10/10)  
Title: The Eye of Neith (10/10)
Author: Emma
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Rhys, Martha, Andy, John Hart; Jack/Ianto, mentions of past others
Rating: R, maybe
Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?
Spoilers: None. Takes place twenty or so years after Series 2 ends.
Summary: Torchwood’s past and Ianto’s future collide when Ianto’s former lover arrives in Cardiff asking for help…
Author's Note: Validium is featured in the classic Doctor Who episode Silver Nemesis . The "Sinister Woman" appears in 42 and The Sound of Drums. For TARDIS technology and society, visit the TARDIS pages of www.whouniverse.org
Other Note: Now that this is finished, and some of you have been kind enough to say you have enjoyed it, I'd like to dedicate it to [personal profile] avon_09 , who, when I told her I was dreaming Torchwood stories, said firmly, "write them down!"


Homecoming is here; Part one is here; Part two is here; Part three is here; Part four is here ; Part five is here; Part six is here; Part seven is here; Part eight is here; Part nine is here

           They lay in a tangle of sheets, sated and exhausted. Jack’s head was tucked between Ianto’s neck and shoulder. Every once in a while he would take a delicate sucking bite wherever he could reach. Ianto stroked up and down Jack’s back with his left hand; his right was clasped in Jack’s left and tucked under Jack’s chin.

 

            “You are definitely recovered,” Jack purred. “In fact, you might be better than ever.”

 

            Ianto used their linked hands to tilt Jack’s chin up. “You’re not so bad yourself,” he said, licking at his lover’s lips until they parted. The kiss was unhurried, gentle, a satisfied culmination rather than a hungry beginning.

 

            Finally they had to come up for air. They smiled at each other as they reshuffled a little before settling back contentedly.

 

            “I forgot to ask you earlier,” Jack said. “What did the Doc give you before he left?”

 

            Ianto reached over to his bedside table and snatched up a small leather-bound book. “With his sense of humor I was terrified it was going to be a fifty-first century sex manual or something.” He positioned it so Jack could see the spine. Embossed in gold on it was Care and Feeding of TARDIS.

 

            “Well, it’s a practical gift in any case.” Jack stroked Ianto’s wrist above the bracelet. “Do you get any sense of it at all?”

 

            “Yes, but very faintly. It’s more of a presence in the back of my head than anything else. The Doctor thinks it might never be more than that. He says this TARDIS is several thousand years older than his, and that makes it ancient even by TARDIS standards.”

 

            Jack looked at him speculatively. “Ianto, what time is it?”

 

            “Nine forty-six and sixteen seconds,” Ianto replied unthinkingly, then looked at Jack in shock. “What the hell?”

 

            “A TARDIS is able to share some of its abilities if it chooses. One of them is perfect time sense, and the other is… tell me, Ianto, what would you say if I asked you to…” he continued in a guttural, click-filled language.

 

            “I’d say you’re getting even more avant-garde in your old… I understood what you were saying! I was hearing you say the words but I was also hearing the meaning. Perfectly separate but simultaneous.”

 

            “The TARDIS, the Doctor’s TARDIS I mean, installed those little improvements in my head permanently. I guess yours has done the same thing to you.”

 

            “That’s nice,” Ianto chuckled. “You won’t be able to swear in Roxicoricofallapatorian again when you’re mad at me.”

 

            Jack made a face at him. “Spoilsport.”

 

            “And speaking of which, it’s lunch and rugby with the guys today, in trade for girls’ day at the spa tomorrow. You coming?”

 

            “Can I go to the spa instead?” When Ianto swatted his arse Jack made a face. “What? Those sea salt body wraps Gwen and Martha were talking about sound fantastic!”

 

            “Vain. Vain. Vain.” Ianto chanted mockingly as he jumped out of bed. “I’m going to shower."

 

            He heard Jack’s phone ring as he walked into the bathroom. Ianto always thought of this particular room as Jack’s own space. When they had bought the place Jack had contacted the best known – and most expensive – bathroom designer in Cardiff and they had happily torn the room down to the bare walls and started again. Ianto, who hadn’t even known there were such folk as bathroom designers, stood by in bemusement as his partner immersed himself in the arcane subjects of chrome fittings, spa tubs, and indirect lighting.

 

            It wasn’t that Jack didn’t take Ianto’s taste into consideration. The place was decorated in Ianto’s own favorite greens and browns and there was cleverly placed cabinetry that kept clutter to a minimum. Even the dirty-clothes bin was hidden behind elegant wood doors. Everything else, though, was a tribute to Jack’s need for pampering.

 

            A huge glassed-in shower dominated the room. It had several shower heads that would deliver perfectly heated water at any pressure desired to every part of the body. At the press of a button the whole thing turned into a sauna; there was even a bench at one end to lounge and indulge. Ianto got a bit hard just from remembering some of the more memorable times he had spent on that bench. Jack was very very good at indulging himself.

 

            On the other side of the room were twin sinks with special lighting controls that could deliver anything from strong white light to let you see yourself clearly while shaving to a gentle soothing amber that did wonders for a hangover. The tub also had special lighting; Jack claimed a bathroom was no place for overhead bulbs. Ever the toilet, which looked more like a modern piece of furniture than a sanitary convenience, had its own lighting controls.

 

            When Ianto had teased Jack about the bathroom, his partner had told him firmly that indoor plumbing was one of the great human cultural advances and he saw no reason to deprive himself.

 

            “I grew up in a farming settlement in the middle of nowhere. Primitive doesn’t even begin to describe it. Loos were tiny cubicles with a bench that had a hole in it over a conveyor belt that carried everything away to the waste recycling facility. Showers were strictly rationed to conserve water. The best time in the Boeshane was the rainy season. Everyone walked outside without a stitch the moment the first drops hit. It looked like a drug-induced orgy except people were soaping each other up instead of fucking. I like the idea of water on demand. Besides, by fifty-first century standards this is barely adequate.”

 

            Ianto had to admit that it had been easy to adjust to Jack’s idea of barely adequate. Stepping into the shower he adjusted the shower heads to deliver a rhythmic massage to his shoulders and back. He poured a bit of the sinfully expensive liquid soap Jack insisted on buying him because “it smells just like you” on a washcloth (Egyptian cotton, thank you very much) and was soaping up when he heard Jack walk in.

 

            “I forgot to tell you,” Jack said as he examined his face in the mirror over one of the sinks, “that I ran into Mrs. Bolton the other day.”

 

            “You ran into Mrs. Bolton? How in the world did you manage that?”

 

            “By the simple expedient of finding out where she was staying and going to visit,” Jack said sheepishly. “I wanted to make sure she was all right.”

 

            “And is she?”

 

            “Yeah. Turns out Davies left her a nice little inheritance, so financially she’ll be fine. She did say she didn’t know what to do with herself now that he wasn’t around. Something about always doing for a nice gentleman and the devil making trouble for idle hands or something. Anyway. I hired her.”

 

            “You what?”

 

            “I hired her. Now, before you say anything, you know we’re both busy and I don’t like having an impersonal cleaning service in the flat every few weeks and you end up doing all the work anyway and you shouldn’t and besides Martha and Gwen could also use some help which Mrs. Bolton said she would be happy to oblige and…”

 

            Ianto, who had been trying unsuccessfully for a while to interrupt, resorted to a high-pitched whistle. “Silence. That’s much better. About Mrs. Bolton, I’m glad you hired her.”

 

            “You are?”

 

            “Sure. Mrs. Bolton is a very nice lady who is also a first class cook. What’s not to like? Besides, I have the feeling she knows how to keep secrets. If she finds out anything she shouldn’t she won’t go blabbing to her canasta club.”

 

            “Good, that’s settled then.” Jack stepped into the shower and crowded Ianto against the tile. “Because I have much more interesting things to do than to discuss our new housekeeper.”

 

            He put his hands on the wall on either side of Ianto’s head and pressed in with his hips. Ianto moaned as he felt Jack’s cock brush against his.

 

            “Oh, yeah,” Jack whispered, rocking his hips slightly. “Have I told you how much… yeah, just like that… I love… yeah… that sound?”

 

            Ianto grabbed at Jack’s neck with both hands and pulled him into a ferocious kiss. They sucked and bit at each other, egging each other on to the edge of violence, then back, easing into a passionate tangle of lips and tongues until they were gasping for air.

 

            “If we don’t slow this down,” Ianto said “it won’t last very long, and I have plans.”

            “Plans?” Jack grinned.

 

            “Yes, plans, Captain Harkness.” Ianto took a soft bite at Jack’s chin. “So who was on the phone?”

 

            Jack, busy running his fingers along the crack of Ianto’s arse and dipping down to his balls, didn’t answer until Ianto grabbed his head, forcing Jack to look at him, and mouthed telephone. “Oh.Yeah. Telephone. It was John. He asked if he could take some time off. I said yes.”

 

            “John? What did he want time off for?”

 

            “Isabella has invited him to Egypt.”

 

            Ianto dropped his hands as if he’d been burned. “John is going… Isabella? Isabella has invited John… what?”

 

            Jack laughed out loud at his partner’s befuddlement. “Yes. Isabella. John. Egypt.”

 

            “Jack… but…what the…” Ianto was incoherent. “But he…”

 

            Jack pushed Ianto back against the tile, and this time used his whole body to hold him in place. “Ianto. You have to stop worrying about John. He’s a big boy. He can take care of himself.”
                                                         ****************


The tale of Ianto's developing talents will be continued in The Siege of Annwfn. But before we follow Jack and Ianto into the Welsh underworld, we'll step back and find out how PC Andy joined Torchwood in The Mermaid of Mermaid Quay.
 
 
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HoldinGoff: brave[identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 04:40 am (UTC)
the thought of ianto merging with a TARDIS is both interesting and a bit frightening. that brain of his having access to that kind of information? yikes.

btw, i had an giant stupid grin on my face when you reference Validium form Silver Nemesis. I was an intern at BBC and worked on 2 Who stories, Silver Nemesis and Battlefield (they were filmed concurrently) like a silly kid I remember fondly those days going "i'm working on Doctor Who" even if it was during the death throws.

i'm sure JN-T is smiling down upon you for referencing one of his favorite stories.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 12:47 pm (UTC)
You did????!!! *quivers with envy*. That was MY dream when I was a silly kid. I love classic Who. "My" Doctor will forever be Peter Davidson. I just downloaded a 5 adventure from audible.com.

Thanks for reading. Encouragement for a novice writer is like rain to the Boeshane :-)
(no subject) - [identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com on August 7th, 2008 06:07 am (UTC) Expand
(no subject) - [identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 7th, 2008 01:18 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, you worked on Battlefield? Possibly one of my fave Seven stories ever! Silver Nemesis is a bit like crack fic - something that you feel slightly guilty for loving - but Battlefield's fantastic.
(no subject) - [identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com on August 7th, 2008 06:12 am (UTC)
rhianona: jeeves and wooster[personal profile] rhianona on August 2nd, 2008 05:00 am (UTC)
This is awesome. I love the idea of Ianto merging with a TARDIS. Also, his comment regarding the Doctor is spot on. :)

The description of the Bathroom is so decadent and so Jack. I wish I had such a lovely bathroom. And I find it amusing that Isabella and John are together. I don't know who to feel more worried about... I think the two of them are in for a lovely ride.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 12:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Ianto has a very clear view of the Doctor. The Doctor, though, still has a few surprises coming!

THe bathroom is my dream bathroom.*giggle* The same way I gave Ianto my love for photography, I gave Jack my dreams of decadence. What can I say? I want to be a spoiled brat.

Isabella and John... scare me. They have been spitting plot bunnies at me since I wrote that scene -- and I did it very early as I always seem to know what the ending will be and have to work my way there...

Edited 2008-08-02 01:08 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 06:05 am (UTC)
Oh Ianto with a TARDIS inside him - terrifying and exciting at the same time.

I love that you are continuing this. I've waited each day for the update to this story.

I love Ianto's reaction to John and Isabella - yep scary.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 12:53 pm (UTC)
I know, I know, isn't that awful? John and Isabella have been very active in flinging plot bunnies my way... AARGH, you were right. They multiply!!!

And you are getting ready to fling angst at our heads, aren't you?
[identity profile] hel-bee.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 09:10 am (UTC)
Now that was fun. I've just read the whole thing in one go (I'm avoiding WIPs at the present or I'll never get any writing done *g*) and you had me gripped.

You have a very nice storytelling style, plot was good and unrushed. In terms of some useful concrit (hope you don't mind) I found your grammar a little hit and miss at times... but nothing that couldn't be fixed by a beta (*offeres servies if you never feel the need*)

Once again, nice fic - thanks for sharing :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 12:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I do the same thing. There are a few people I can't resist, but otherwise I wait until they are finished also.

That's a very kind offer, as I've read some of your stuff and I like it. I will admit I was really concentrating on making the plot hang together and getting the voices right. It was difficult, aging them but keeping them in character. Next time I can concentrate on smoothing out the bumps. I will keep you in mind, believe me!

Edited 2008-08-02 12:56 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [identity profile] hel-bee.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] hull1984.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 09:50 am (UTC)
Brilliant.

So much plot. Okay I 'fess up, I didn't understand it all in places (not seen much DW so not completely up with the whole TARDIS thing) but still enjoyed it immensely.

Loved your take on John, you had his voice spot on.

And of course, your older, more experienced Ianto was perfect :)

Glad to see you intend to continue in this 'verse, I look forward to reading more when you post.

Edited 2008-08-02 09:51 am (UTC)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 01:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Really, this was a bit of a wankfest for me, because I loooove Classic Who, so I was flinging references all over the place. But, one clarification: a metastructure is the nucleus of a TARDIS, sort of the consciousness;the same way Gallifreyans are 'woven on looms,' TARDIS are 'started' on hyper-looms. And the way a TARDIS is brought to full consciousness is by imprinting a Time Lord's biological signature on it. That's the nucleus of the matter, and keep it in mind *hint, hint*
[identity profile] tinydancer-30.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 10:09 am (UTC)
Oh I loved this fic. Just read it all in one go and it had me gripped. It makes a nice change to read a story where the Janto-ness (is that even a word?!) is secondary to the plot. And what a plot!!! Complex, well thought-out and brilliantly characterised. Loved John going on holiday with Isabella at the end. And Jack hiring Mrs Bolton (such a Jack thing to do). And even Donna had a fleeting appearance (kind of). Yay! Love Donna!

Am now sitting waiting patiently for promised sequels.....

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 01:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I wanted Janto, but I wanted it in context. Not that I don't enjoy a good spot of smut, but I had a story first. I don't think I will ever be a good smut writer anyway... It's the personality thing.

I love Donna too. I just watched Journey's End last night was was crying buckets... And I was angry, too. I think she preferred to die than to go back, and he should have allowed it. Except that... never mind. Can't give away secrets.

[identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 10:38 am (UTC)
Thank you for doing what I asked. Thank you so much.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 01:06 pm (UTC)
*brings fic to your feet like corgi bringing toy*
(no subject) - [identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 01:08 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] sarahjane6.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 02:12 pm (UTC)
Excellent story. Good to see you have others planned. I'll be watching.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 02:15 pm (UTC)
Are you sure you've never written fanfic before? This has been a well written and original piece, which is absolutely brilliant for a first effort. In fact it's absolutely brilliant no matter what. I kind of like the idea of Ianto (amongst others) being part TARDIS, rather than a timelord. You deserve a whole barrel load of chocolate for this, it's been a great read. And I love that bathroom!

I'm looking forward to finding out more about Andy joining Torchwood - I love PC Andy! Tell me it will be soon!

The only downer is that some of your formatting on the LJ side is a bit wonky (the bits in particular I'm thinking of is where the header appeared in the middle of the first sentence in parts 4 and 5) but there ain't any complaints about the content!



Edited 2008-08-02 02:22 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
You know, I just noticed that yesterday and fixed some of it. I don't get it, because I don't see it at my end. I'll have to learn some more about this formatting thing. LJ seems to play games sometimes.

My first, absolute first fanfiction. I dreamed most of the story and then started to write it down, and it all flowed. The absolute hardest was getting the voices right. I was aging people, I didn't want them to be the same; intelligent people grow. But I also didn't want them to lose their character...
I can see why you have commented in your own stuff about getting voices right.
[identity profile] gypsylady.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 03:14 pm (UTC)
I think this is one of the most creative futures stories I've read. Please, keep writing them for as long as your imagination serves you.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you! There's a couple of more. Plot bunnies seem to go on a breeding spree once in a while.
[identity profile] 42footprints.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 07:24 pm (UTC)
Oh yum! Continuation of the Ianto/TARDIS? You know how to please a girl! John and Isabella, now that's just inspired. I've really enjoyed this series, thank you for sharing it with us.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 07:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I couldn't resist as the bunnies kept biting my ankles! But first, Andy. And John/Isabella have been giving me ideas...
[identity profile] sal101010.livejournal.com on August 4th, 2008 12:13 pm (UTC)
I love how much you introduced in the last couple of chapters. This is so not an end, it's just that the next bit has a new title! Looking forward to more.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 4th, 2008 02:40 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I truly had not planned for this to grow into a series, but it has and, well, what the heck. *I* want to know what happens (I have some ideas about the general directions, but I'm still vague on the details!
[identity profile] doctor-addicted.livejournal.com on August 4th, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
This certainly laid the foundations to a very interesting new TW verse. I've not got the slightest clue about Egyptian mythology, but you know how to make it interesting... At what point is the SGC going to show up anyway? *w*
Loved this story. Looking forward to the Pre-/Sequels :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 4th, 2008 02:42 pm (UTC)
Well, Neith is a real goddess, one of my favorites, probably a very early creation deity adopted into the egyptian pantheon, and all the other gods mentioned are also real. Everything else is pure invention. I've only now started seeing SGC, would you believe it? But the universes are too separate for it to be a crossover. I'm going down a slightly different path on this one.

Thanks for the encouragement!
[identity profile] grlindirtyshirt.livejournal.com on August 4th, 2008 05:28 pm (UTC)
This series was just brilliant. A really excellent story. And you brought in Andy! And he's getting his own story! I'm dead excited to read the other two series.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 4th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you. Yes, Andy's next. I have a big soft spot for Andy...
[identity profile] queixo.livejournal.com on August 10th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
hot damn!!!
so i friended u before i finished reading and without commenting cos i wanna make sure i get the rest but wanted to wait to finish this part before commenting.
o...k... for someone for who this is their first fanfic you are excellent. totally gripping story that when i started reading it this morning almost made me cancel plans i had with a friend to go shopping cos i wanted to finish it then.
that said, have you written anything original? i would love to read that too.
i'm now off to read the next bits. talk again soon.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 10th, 2008 02:13 am (UTC)
Re: hot damn!!!
Thank you! All words of appreciation carefully collected and treasured!

I am working on something original but I don't know exactly what it is yet. Besides, Torchwood has eaten my brain to a ridiculous extent!
Re: hot damn!!! - [identity profile] queixo.livejournal.com on August 10th, 2008 02:17 am (UTC)
[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com on August 10th, 2008 07:16 pm (UTC)
Oh what a fanatastic ending. And there's going to be a sequel!!! WHOOOOT! But first an interlude with PC Andy :) This was really good. I really loved all the mythology stuff and John going to Egypt...brilliant :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 10th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you! John going to Egypt was the real punchline of the whole thing :-)
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bettina_/ on November 6th, 2008 04:46 pm (UTC)
I just came around to reading this and I really enjoyed it.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on November 8th, 2008 02:04 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] mcparrot.livejournal.com on April 16th, 2009 12:05 pm (UTC)
Oh that was glorious. Going to go read some more another night.
such possibilities.
Thank you
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on April 16th, 2009 05:43 pm (UTC)
No, Thank you!
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on May 6th, 2009 11:16 am (UTC)
Ah, it would seem i did start reading this but somehow lost the plot and missed the last few chapters, which is confusing as this was utterly brilliant!

Now on to the next one ...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on May 6th, 2009 12:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I hope your enjoying your days off...
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[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 08:42 am (UTC)
Brava! wonderfully done. Great story and much fun!

I am however going to bed! before I wander into Annwfn with you, you devious woman you!

Lovely stuff!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:57 am (UTC)
Thank you. You will like that one, I think.
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[identity profile] gail19.livejournal.com on August 30th, 2010 08:09 pm (UTC)
Creative, character challenging, and fun to read.

You did a great job aging them and still keeping them recognizable as themselves. The original characters are nicely balanced - enough detail to flesh them out and make them work for the story, but not take over the entire focus. The writing is just so good.

Thanks for writing and sharing.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 31st, 2010 03:14 am (UTC)
*blushes* thank you!