22 August 2009 @ 11:17 am
Torchwood Fic: Day one (3/4)  

Title: Day One, Part Three of Four

Author: Emma

Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.

Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Summary: Gwen’s first day at work is… not the usual thing
Author's Note: AU like nobody's business!

Author’s Note: The cockatrice, or basilisk, is a common “monster” and heraldic symbol; the revenant part of the legend is all mine.
Author's Note: This is Ianto's car.


Part One is here; Part Two is here

            Toshiko backed out of the NHS database, covering her tracks as she went. Even though any anti-hacking software that sniffed her out would be stopped in its tracks by the Torchwood mainframe’s own security systems, she took pride in doing a thorough job. It did not do to become sloppy just because one had a failsafe backup.

 

            She sat back, sighing with pleasure. It was in moments like this, when everything worked flawlessly and data was found, sorted and correlated into the proper pattern, that she truly understood that her psychic blindness was not the crippling disability her parents had obsessed over. Her materialistic skills, as her father contemptuously described them, served a purpose that honored her ancestors in ways he would never understand.

 

            Her lips curved into a little smile as she wondered how Midori was doing these days. The last time they had spoken, her mother had told her that her cousin was once again getting married. It seemed the paragon’s career consisted of finding progressively older and wealthier men to pay for her expensive tastes. Tosh chuckled as she admired her bespoke high-heeled boots. She managed very well on her own, thank you.

 

            “Now that’s a wicked little sound,” Ianto remarked, offering her a fresh cup of coffee. “And yes, that is just amazing footwear. How you don’t break your neck remains a mystery to all of us.”

 

            “Natural talent, Ianto. Natural talent.” She waved at the monitor. “Have we heard from Jack and Gwen?”

 

            “Not yet. Did you find anything?”

 

            Tosh tapped a key and a police record filled the screen. The girl in the photo looked like the girl in the CCTV feed, but, in her hopelessness, she looked more dead than the revenant. “Carys Weston. Prostitution record. Kid got pregnant at sixteen and her parents kicked her out of the house. Conservative Catholics, wanted her to be a nun. She lost the baby and ended up working for one of the less reputable clubs. Killed herself at nineteen. She was buried outside the wall at St. Peter. Her father died three days later.”

 

            “Shit.” Owen had come up behind them. “Can we find out who the father of the baby is? Because she’s going to go for him sooner or later.”

 

            “I’ve been looking. Nothing so far. I’m going to…”

 

            The soft ping that signaled incoming data interrupted her. She put it up on the screen.

 

            “Missing person. Jonathan Astell, owner and operator of the KitKat Club… That’s classy, isn’t it? Imaginative too…There’s a witness this time, a Mary Pennyman. Constable at the scene says they’ve had to take her to Psychiatric ICU. She was hysterical, screaming that a dead girl was coming to get them all.” The computer pinged again. “Another report. A Mrs. Ellen Weston called 999. She says her daughter is trying to break into her house.”  She scribbled down the address and handed it to Ianto. “Owen…”

 

            “Yeah.” The doctor stripped off the lab coat. “Let’s go, Ianto. Tosh, call Jack. Have them meet us there. Also, run a check on the teachers at her school. Married, middle-aged, tends to take students under his wing, maybe a few whispers have surfaced here and there.  In cases like this there are hints all over the place but nobody wants to tackle the problem.”

 

            “All right.”

 

            “Hey, Tea-Boy, can we take the Sprite? It’ll get us there faster.”

 

            Ianto rolled his eyes. “Yes, Owen, we can take my car. But you’re not driving. You’re never, ever driving it.”

 

            “Spoilsport.”

 

            The Weston house was in on of those Council subdivisions where considerable effort had been spent on making the neighbourhood look presentable, and yet it had a sad, derelict look to it. Perhaps it was the desolate expanse of closely-clipped grass, where all the other places around it had made an attempt at a garden, or at least a few window boxes filled with pansies or geraniums. Or maybe it was the shuttered windows, where many other places had cheerful curtains open to the afternoon breeze.

           

            “Gawd, this is a depressing place,” Owen muttered as they walked up to the front door. “No wonder the girl…”

 

            Ianto help up a finger. “Listen.”

 

            Somewhere inside the house things were being shattered while a woman wailed.

 

            Owen tried the front door. It swung open. They charged in, following the noises to the eat-in kitchen at the back of the house. What they found was so different from what they had been expecting that they were momentarily paralyzed. A woman wearing a faded housecoat was sitting at the table, staring into the distance, while Carys Weston screamed hoarsely at her as she stalked around the room throwing things to the floor.

 

            The older woman turned to them. “Finally. Really, I don’t know what use the police is these days. You’ve come to take her away, right?”

 

            Owen started to say something but was stopped by Ianto’s hand on his arm. He turned away in disgust as the Welshman stepped into the kitchen.

 

            “Yes, Mrs. Weston. That’s what we’re here for.”

 

            “So she wasn’t dead after all and the old man died for nothing. He wanted to be with her, he said, and he was dead and gone in three days. Didn’t think about me once, did he? Leaving me in this place, having to live off charity…”

 

            Ianto tuned her out as he approached Carys. The girl had snatched up a knife and was holding it inexpertly in both hands.

 

            Carys? Why don’t you come with us and we can get this sorted out?”

 

            She laughed hysterically. “Sorted out? They killed my baby. They threw me away like I was garbage. I’m sorting it out just fine. Go away.”

 

            “Have you thought about this? Suicides go to Purgatory, Carys, but murderers…”

 

            He made a lunge at her. Slapping the knife out of her hand, he tried to restrain her by grabbing her wrists and using his body weight to pin her in place. But he hadn’t counted on the terrible heat pouring off her skin. It burned his palms. He could smell burning flesh and Owen screaming at him to let go. Stubbornly, he tried to hang on, but finally he had to pull his hands away as his skin began to redden and blister.

 

            Carys ran towards Owen, hands outstretched. He pivoted out of the way and tried to push her off balance as she went past him. She slapped at his shoulder, and the force of the blow sent him flying. His jacket burst into flames where she had touched it, and he yelped, tearing it off and stomping on it.

 

            She ran out the front door. They gave chase, but she was moving incredibly fast. As they reached the pavement they saw the Torchwood SUV turn the corner. It screeched to a stop and Gwen jumped out, holding her police issue revolver in her hand and pointing it at the girl running towards them.

 

            “Stop! Stop or I’ll shoot. Stop!”

 

            Carys cannonaded right into her, sending her to the ground. Gwen dropped the gun as her head bounced off the tarmac with the force of the impact.  Carys looked at Jack, who was moving towards her from the other side of the car and laughed as she slammed her hands on the back of the SUV.  The metal burst into flames. Jack changed course immediately, diving for the storage space under the front passenger seat. Pulling out the fire extinguisher, he aimed it at the fire. Carys ran down the street and was soon out of sight.

 

            Ianto and Owen had reached Gwen and were helping her to her feet.

 

            “Hey, newbie,” Owen groused as he checked her over, “next time you have a gun pointed at an undead creature who’s walking about turning people into dust, do me a favor and pull the trigger, ok?”

 

            “Owen, stop bullying Gwen,” Ianto said, “or I’ll tell her all about your encounter with the succubus.”

 

            “No loyalty from one’s colleagues,” the Doctor muttered as he pulled the first aid kit from the smouldering SUV. “Come here and let me check those hands.”

 

            “What now?” Ianto asked Jack as the Captain put down the extinguisher to examine Ianto’s hands himself.

 

            “Now we try to figure out who she’s going after next.”

 

            “The old bat knows something,” Owen said. “Go work your charm while I take care of these two.”

                       



edited for spelling idiocy.
 
 
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[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 03:34 pm (UTC)
Does she know she's a Health and Safety nightmare? But I love this Owen. He's brilliant. Also, I want Ianto's car. Please?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 03:41 pm (UTC)
I think she's figured it out. She certainly uses it against Jack! And I'm working at Owen. He's still a bit of a jackass at times, but he's not an utter twat.

And aren't Austin Healeys just scrumptious? That's a 1962 model. Just beautiful.
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:05 pm (UTC)
I always wondered how Tosh kept from breaking her neck. B.c I can barely handle heels.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:10 pm (UTC)
Me too. Well, I used to be able to handle them... now? Kitten heels or lower.
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:06 pm (UTC)
Oh i so want Owen's car! I like this Owen, lots.

And your Carys ... scary!!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:13 pm (UTC)
Well, it's Ianto's car and Owen lusts after it. But yes, he's working out well. And the whole episode is darker and more scary. I mean it's not just an alien sex gas...
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC)
I think i was thinking about Owen too much in this chapter, lol ... i knew that!
[identity profile] honey-felidae.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:07 pm (UTC)
Oh i so want to hear the story about Owen and the Succubus! X3
That must be hilarious!

Again a great chapter! :3
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:13 pm (UTC)
Someday, I think. Thank you!
Sam: inappropriate[identity profile] robling-t.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 05:17 pm (UTC)
Seconding the call for the "Owen and the succubus" story, yeah... :)
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:08 pm (UTC)
Can I have Ianto's car? That was gorgeous... and I love what he called it.

Lovely characterizations... more soon?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 04:14 pm (UTC)
Actually it's called that... the Austin Healey Sprite, 1962 model. British cars of that era... yes. I drool and dream of owning one.

As soon as I can! Sheesh. And I found my email. You must have stayed up late writing!

Edited 2009-08-22 04:15 pm (UTC)
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 05:50 pm (UTC)
Oh... I didn't know what it was, I just thought it lovely looking and want one. :)

I know, patience. I tell you all that often enough. And nope, just an hour after you left.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 05:57 pm (UTC)
Whoa. It must have been like a dam breaking!
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 06:00 pm (UTC)
Pretty much... told you I needed you to yell at me. :)
[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 05:38 pm (UTC)
Oohh I want Ianto's car and I love Owen in this.
Brilliant, Looking forward to the next part :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 05:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 05:59 pm (UTC)
*attempts to pet Ianto's car on screen* Love that choice of car
Also, amazing update, still adore your Tosh, and Cary's is a much better threat in this
So many hints, I'm looking forward to more of this
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 06:16 pm (UTC)
I have a thing for Austin Healeys-- so of course I gave one to Ianto! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm enjoying writing it quite a bit too.
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 06:23 pm (UTC)
well, adore classic 60's cars,especially MG's and Austins, so agree with Ianto's good taste :D
Am completely enjoying this, the 'verse you're building here has so much potential, it's fantastic and I can't wait to see where you take it
[identity profile] wreath-of-roses.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 06:54 pm (UTC)
Love the Ianto/Owen interaction. Poor Ianto burning his hands. *hands him ice pack and aloe vera plant*
This makes me wonder how they are going to catch Carys, she actually seems to be a bit of a challenge in this version.

Ianto's car is lovely...death trap in an accident, but lovely.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 06:58 pm (UTC)
Oh, they are... catching her, that is... And the car *shrugs* one has to run risks sometimes :D
[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 08:14 pm (UTC)
I simply love your Tosh and your Ianto is so cool! I like to see him in action and not only inside the Hub.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 10:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm trying to develop each character as I would have liked them. In general, canon, but each a little different, stronger (Tosh) less of a jerk (Owen), more to the front (Ianto)
Midori[identity profile] midori-marmotte.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
Ho, I really have to comment at least once in a while, I read your AU with great pleasure, and this one is no exception to the rule. Please go on writing like that...

(PS: The fact that Tosh's mum is named Midori made me smile :-) )
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 10:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 09:04 pm (UTC)
I love this whole scene ... Owen is somewhat improved without losing that curmudgeon side that so made him OWEN.

Also - Tosh ROCKS...

Drools on car ....
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 10:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I wanted Owen to be a bit less of an arse but not lost the bite. I'm glad it works. And Tosh does, always has... And the Austin... ah yes, the Austin... there's a history behind that!
[identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 11:48 pm (UTC)
this darker and far more interesting take than alien sex gas.
wonderful job improving the canon of the first season showing us glimpses of tosh/owen/ianto that rtd waited to the 2nd season to show us. hated the fact in 2nd season just as i was really starting to warm to owen(he seemed more human after death, sigh)they killed him.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2009 11:55 pm (UTC)
Short of a succubus/incubus story I couldn't find anything to equal "alien sex gas" in the supernatural, not to mention meteors being cracked open, so I decided on this instead. I am changing things about a little, especially about the characters. And I had a special problem with Owen -- so I'm fixing him just enough to make him likeable in spite of his usual behavior.
[identity profile] gingerlr.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 12:21 am (UTC)
drooling over car...

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 12:52 am (UTC)
It is drooly, isn't it? But at the price... in my dreams. And yes, you will get to know why Ianto drives a classic, very expensive (retrofitted) car...
HoldinGoff[identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 08:34 am (UTC)
is it sad that the first thing i thought of when you mentioned a sprite was 'oh god, i hate that roof?' yeah, had a bug eye sprite and the erector set roof that you then rolled the canvas over and the plastic side curtains (instead of windows) were such a joy when it rained.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 01:38 pm (UTC)
I know, I've heard about the issues and if I'm ever rich enough I might get another model and who am I kidding I loove how it looks!!!
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 08:48 am (UTC)
Frogeye love!

I really am enjoying your take on all the characters and situations in this AU, is a good read! Creepy firestarter Carys is creepy!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 01:39 pm (UTC)
I wanted her creepy. I'm glad it worked. Stephen King I'm not, so I wasn't sure...
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 11:43 am (UTC)
Talk about too hot to handle LOL

This fic just keeps you on the edge of your seat:O

:D
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 01:40 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I was working for creepy and surprising, so I'm glad you feel that way...
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 02:39 pm (UTC)
Creepy and surprising. oh this fic definitely has that:O