23 August 2009 @ 11:49 am
Torchwood Fic: Day One (4/4)  

Title: Day One, Part Four of Four

Author: Emma

Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.

Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Summary: Gwen’s first day at work is… not the usual thing
Author's Note: AU like nobody's business!

Author’s Note: The belief that unbaptized children's souls ended up in limbo was overturned recently when the Church officially announced that it was very possible they actually went to Heaven.
Author's Note: If someone notices a similarity between Jack's birth and some of the legends of Merlin the Magician... yes. It's intended but it's only a similarity.


Part One is here; Part Two is here; Part Three is here

            Gwen shook her head. “No excuses, Jack. I screwed up.”

 

            “Yes, she did.”

 

            “Shut up, Owen. Yes, Gwen, you did, but there were extenuating circumstances.” He ticked them off on his fingers. “First, the situation looked like something out of a police training exercise, so you reacted like a cop. Second, it looked like a young girl rushing at you. Under ordinary circumstances she could have been drunk, on drugs, or even the victim of a crime. Again, you reacted like a cop. And third, you would have been less than human if you hadn’t been startled.”

 

            “So how do I unlearn all this stuff I know? Learn how to do it right? Because I can get myself or somebody else killed if I don’t.”

 

            “You study. You train. You listen to people with more experience. You survive your mistakes and you figure out how not to make them again.” He grinned at her. “And when you fall flat on your arse you take all the crap Owen here is going to hand you without throttling him. Strictly speaking, throttling the staff is my job.”

 

            “Of course,” Ianto said, “if Jack doesn’t actually catch you with your hands around his throat, I could be persuaded to provide an alibi.”

 

            “You just wait until your next physical, Tea Boy. I guarantee you won’t be able to sit on your bum for a week.”

 

            They had waited for the police at the Weston house. Jack had exerted all his charm on Mrs. Weston but had met with a blank stare and a complete refusal to speak to anyone. The only good news was that Kenyon had been assigned to desk duty for a while. Andy told them that he had made so many stupid comments and threats in front of senior officers that he had been disciplined.

 

            Kenyon’s absence seemed to make the constables more relaxed. Some even teased Gwen about the state of the SUV, but she got her own back when an identical one turned the corner and came to a stop in front of the house. Two dour men got out and handed the keys to Ianto, taking the keys of the damaged one from Jack with resigned looks.

 

            The question of who rode with whom – Gwen had been ready to arm wrestle Owen for a chance at the Sprite – was solved when Jack plopped himself down on the passenger seat. He gave them a smug grin and waved them to the new SUV.  Gwen had to endure Owen’s sarcastic commentary on her performance all the way back to the Hub, which had led to Jack finding them in the parking lot with her hands around Owen’s throat and the subsequent conversation.

 

            Jack barely waited for the cog door to roll before bounding into the Hub.

 

            “Toshiko. My beautiful, clever Toshiko. Tell me you have something.”

 

            “I have something.” Her eyes went wide at the sight of Ianto’s bandaged hands. “What happened to you?”

 

            “Our hero tried to hang on to a revenant with his bare hands,” Owen answered. “He’s on light duty for a few days. He can still make the coffee, but someone else will carry the tray. Bandages will be changed twice a day, and no, he can’t do it by himself. Ok? Ok.” He plopped down at his work station. “God, I am tired and sore. And my jacket is a tax deduction.”

 

            Jack waved off the doctor’s complaints. “Tosh, what did you find for us?”

 

            “One Edward Gwynne. Married, two kids at Uni. Wife is an accountant. Edward teaches maths at St. Anne’s Preparatory for Girls and is by all accounts excellent at it. He has taught at several other Catholic schools. He seems to move to a new job every four or five years. In fact, he’s leaving Cardiff at the end of the school term for a post somewhere in Yorkshire. I made some phone calls. Let’s just say the silence was very enlightening.”

 

            “Address?” Tosh handed him a piece of paper. “Gwen, Owen, with me. Ianto…”

 

            “Jack. There’s something else.” Toshiko interrupted. “I’ve been monitoring the police frequencies. A few minutes ago there was a rather nasty exchange between the Cardiff Central superintendent and one of the constable sergeants.”

 

            “Kenyon?”

 

            “Yes. The superintendent was reaming him for leaving his desk without permission and Kenyon told him that he knew who she was going after and he was going to get there before fucking Torchwood.”

 

            “In abuse cases,” Owen said quietly, “authorities sometimes tend to give the abuser the benefit of the doubt, especially if he’s a member of good standing of a religious group.”

 

            “Son of a… Let’s go, kids. Ianto, you stay here. Tosh, keep an eye on him. Burn victims can go into shock suddenly.”

 

            “Will do. And don’t make a face at me, Mr. Jones.” She pointed to the station next to hers. “There’s actually something interesting for you to do. Remember those odd energy readings we got last week? They’re back. And they’re all yours.”

 

            The Gwynnes lived in one of the professional enclaves in Roath, near the park. Kenyon’s police car was parked in front. Male voices and a woman’s screams could be heard, loud enough for a few curious neighbours to have gathered on the pavement. Gwen noticed that the arrival of the SUV with its Torchwood logo caused people to remember they had business elsewhere. The road was empty in what seemed like seconds.

 

            “You know, this breaking and entering gig is getting really old,” Owen muttered.

 

            “It’s only breaking and entering if it’s locked,” Jack said as he touched the handle and the door swung open. “Gwen, stay with Owen and pay attention.”

 

            One of the male voices had become a long wordless wail that raised Gwen’s hackles. She followed Owen as he chased Jack upstairs. One of the bedrooms had been converted into an office. Eric Kenyon lay crumpled against the far wall, mewling and retching, more like an animal than a human being. Carys Weston stood over the rapidly decomposing remains of… something that might at some point have been a man. She looked up at their arrival and smiled gently.

 

            “You’re too late. I’m almost done.” She released the shirt she was holding. “He offered to pay for an abortion. He had done it before, he said. He screamed at the end. He sounded like a baby. Do you think my baby sounds like that in Purgatory?” She pointed at Kenyon. “He’s the last. Edward sent him to my parents. He told them I was a slut who deserved punishment. My baby died because of him.”

 

            Carys.” Jack walked into the room, hands out so she could see he didn’t have a weapon. “Unbaptized babies don’t go to Purgatory. The Church says they remain perfectly happy and content in a special place in limbo. You know that.”

 

            She shook her head. “No. Father William says the Church’s teachings have become twisted because it’s trying to become modern. He says they go to Purgatory and they have to be redeemed. That’s why I killed myself. I thought, if suicides go to Purgatory, we can be together and it won’t matter. You see?”

 

            “Father William was wrong. You baby is perfectly happy and content. I swear it to you.” Jack kept moving closer, putting himself between Kenyon and Carys. “But you’ve killed three people. Who’s going to take care of your baby now?”

 

            “I couldn’t find him! I just wandered in the dark until I was outside again and I knew what I had to do. See, if I make them pay for their sins, then my baby and I will be redeemed. The two guys… I just needed the strength. I need to find my baby!”

 

            She exploded into motion, shoving at him as she tried to get at Kenyon. Jack staggered under the impact, but held on, enfolding her in his arms. Remembering Ianto’s burns, Gwen tried to rush in, but Owen slammed her against the door.

 

            “You said you wanted to learn. Learn, then.”

 

            Gwen watched as Jack pulled Carys against him until her head was resting on his chest and pressed his lips to the top of her head. Their bodies began to glow. Slowly, as the glow became stronger, the girl became more and more insubstantial, until Jack was holding what seemed to be a column of light. Then, suddenly, it all dissipated and Jack stood alone. He opened his eyes and looked at them. For a moment his eyes burned pure gold, and then the fire died and his beautiful blue eyes were back to normal.

 

            “Owen?”

 

            “Wait in the SUV. Gwen and I can handle the rest.”

 

            Gwen watched Jack go downstairs then turned to Owen. “What the hell just happened? Who is he? What is he?”

 

            “Among other things, Jack is a Gate. In certain circumstances he can help souls cross the Wall.”

 

            “But only Blessed ones can do that! Or…”

 

            Owen nodded. “Jack’s mother was raped by a demon. His aunt, the Abbess Muirgheal of Dumfries, baptized him as he was being born, but she couldn’t completely counteract his father’s nature. Jack has spent his life atoning for something that isn’t his fault. Each time he does that it hurts like bloody blazes but he still does it.” He sighed. “Come on. You call Andy. I’ll deal with Kenyon. Bastard’s probably going to spend the rest of his life in Providence Park. Couldn’t happen to a nicer guy.”

 

 
 
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[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 04:17 pm (UTC)
Oh wow!! I love who/what Jack is!!
When can we expect the next ep? There will be a next ep right?? Pretty please with Janto on top?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 04:22 pm (UTC)
Yes. Spirit Mirror coming up. That's Ghost Machine in canon.
(no subject) - [identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 04:28 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 04:19 pm (UTC)
Ooooh, i love Jack's interesting past and what he is!!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 04:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you! There's more on that front...
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:01 pm (UTC)
OMG!!!! I love it. How fast can you type? *grin*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:38 pm (UTC)
Not THAT fast!
(no subject) - [identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:55 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] honey-felidae.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:28 pm (UTC)
So Jacke is a Gate...
a JackGate. Jack McGate....

cool.

uh Ghostemachine is the next right? i cannot wait *jump*

Lovly
*hugs*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:39 pm (UTC)
Yes, it is. Known as Spirit Mirror in this Universe.
[identity profile] minimumstitch.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:39 pm (UTC)
Love the way you have explained Jack's abilities. Poor Carys, all she wanted was her child. Gorgeous story and really looking forward to the next episode.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 05:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Jack's abilities was almost a given, considering what I wanted to do... But how did he get them? Thought of the "son of the demon" Merlin legend, and had an AHA!moment. And poor Carys indeed.
rhianona: don't shoot[personal profile] rhianona on August 23rd, 2009 05:53 pm (UTC)
interesting twist on Jack, here. I like it a lot. Nice end to the episode too.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 06:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 06:18 pm (UTC)
Lovely ending to this and very interesting backstory for Jack, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes
But, I'm still curious about Ianto
And, more to come? Excellent! *wiggles happily in seat*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 07:18 pm (UTC)
Ianto's turn comes up in two. The episode known as Cyberwoman, which I call Hungry Heart.
(no subject) - [identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 07:35 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 06:27 pm (UTC)
Ooh! Jack is the son of Demon - makes sense in this universe. I love it. More soon? Please?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 07:19 pm (UTC)
Soon. I'm plotting the next two!
[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 06:27 pm (UTC)
wow... great chapter
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 07:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 06:32 pm (UTC)
Oh I very like Jack's abilities and that does explain his immortality to a point.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 07:20 pm (UTC)
It does indeed. And it will explain a lot more later....
[identity profile] eumelia.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 08:33 pm (UTC)
Wow I am loving this AU!

Everyone is such a great parallel and what a great retelling. Jack's abilities are amazing and I'm so curious about Ianto!

Can't wait for more!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 08:40 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] adira-tam.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 09:20 pm (UTC)
wow...just wow,
love this take on it all
wow
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 09:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
ext_41651[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC)
Oh I loved this so much. A lot more than the ep. I really like the feel of it all as well. It really feels kind of dark, but in a good way. I have never heard of the gate thing, I like it very much.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 09:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you. That's what I was aiming for -- darker but not hopeless. And the Gate... erm... I made it up. There's a fair mixing of "real" myths and history and "made-up" ones throughout these...
[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC)
"Jack has spent his life atoning for something that isn’t his fault." And that's Jack's tragical constant through the universes.
Love him to be a half-demon. Great!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 09:43 pm (UTC)
Yes. I wanted that equivalence to remain.
[identity profile] wreath-of-roses.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 10:38 pm (UTC)
Ooooooh, Jack has pretty glowy eyes, and special powers. He's magically delicious!

I'm I a horrible person for wanting Carys to take out Kenyon? That guy is/was a real slime ball!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 12:01 am (UTC)
I don't think it's so much pretty as terrifying, at times! And yes, I thought of having her take him out but a lifetime in a madhouse sounded so much better...
Twincityhacker: Boeshane Peninsula[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 11:16 pm (UTC)
Wait. Does Jack speak with a Scottish accent in this?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 12:03 am (UTC)
Possibly a faint one... but I think he can turn it on and off at will... :D
[identity profile] wynkat-writes.livejournal.com on August 23rd, 2009 11:37 pm (UTC)
This:

“Owen?”

“Wait in the SUV. Gwen and I can handle the rest.”

Gwen watched Jack go downstairs then turned to Owen. “What the hell just happened? Who is he? What is he?”

“Among other things, Jack is a Gate. In certain circumstances he can help souls cross the Wall.”


Oh this is perfect! I love your Jack being a little uncertain after doing such a huge bit of magic and turning to Owen for connection and direction. This is wonderful.

I also LOVE Jack as a Gate, I've had a theory (and even started incorporating it into the most recent story I wrote) for a while that this something that could be going on with or done with Jack magically / mythically speaking. Its almost like he is always in that liminal place between the sacred and the profane - which is really what a gate is. That would make the Doctor increadibly uncomfortable from a different way than what the TW/DW writes choose - him being a fixed point in time. It would be another kind of uncomfortable and disturbing to one who can see all time and space.

Oh, and Tosh with the boots and thoughts about her sister, delicious.

Yum! I adore this universe you are creating more and more!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 12:07 am (UTC)
Thank you. I agree Jack is an in-between being even in canon -- time and space can't touch him. Here, life and death are only stages to him. It'll be interesting to see how it develops. I have an outline but I';m filling in as I write. I'm glad you're enjoying this!
[identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
love this world.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 02:07 am (UTC)
Thank you. It's flowing well, I think!
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 03:29 am (UTC)
"Here, life and death are only stages to him."

Exactly. I think this probably explains why he says he he sees nothing in the time between life and death (not that I am listening to that in my work, but that's me :) ) - being the gate could mean that you cant access whatever it is we go to after real death happens. So for him he is in a limbo land when he dies and is just not getting that memo. Silly Jack.

"It'll be interesting to see how it develops. I have an outline but I';m filling in as I write."

Very much so! Oooh... outline! Yay. I'll join the chorus of commenters who hope you have lots of time to write so we can see more of this lovely universe very soon. Though I do know the realities of life, so I will try to be patient. :)

Oh I am enjoying this very much. This makes my Fangirl heart as well as my Pagan soul *very* happy, so thank you!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 01:19 pm (UTC)
I'm not sure THIS Jack can't see anything... We'll see...
(no subject) - [identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 07:20 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 02:14 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, this is getting .....Dark.

Interesting fic though
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 02:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Just a bit dark. Just enough, I think.
(no subject) - [identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on August 24th, 2009 02:44 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] keestone.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 03:57 am (UTC)
Ooh. I can definitely see this version of Jack having some brother problems. Fascinating universe. :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 04:03 am (UTC)
Oh, yes. Big ones. I'm glad you like it!
[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 02:02 pm (UTC)
Whee, more mythological facty things. :D I love it when Jack is special. XD

Sooo looking forwards to the sequel. =D
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[identity profile] faelivrinn.livejournal.com on September 4th, 2009 11:52 pm (UTC)
I found this series today, and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy it. I love what Jack is and what he can do, and the fact that Ianto gets to shine as well. I also really like how you have made Gwen less aggravating - I really can't stand her on the show, but I like her here. On the show even Jack gets on my nerves in his scenes with Gwen, so I really love all the subtle changes you've made to the way they all act - they are still recognizably themselves, except better :P
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[identity profile] observer3.livejournal.com on August 10th, 2010 07:15 pm (UTC)
Just started reading your Magician series-intriguing and quite ingenious. the last paragraph of how Jack came into being and what he is was really inventive. a most excellent read-thanks
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 12th, 2010 12:44 am (UTC)
Thank you! I hope it holds up as you read....