24 August 2009 @ 11:48 pm
Torchwood Fic: Spirit Mirror (1/4)  

Title: Spirit Mirror, Part One of Four

Author: Emma

Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.

Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Summary: A cursed mirror sends Owen on a quest for justice… and Gwen stumbles upon a secret.
Author's Note: This, in canon, would be Ghost Machine


           Gwen watched Ianto as he maneuvered the cursor along the satellite view of the road they were driving on. Each little twitch he made was replicated by the delicate antenna on the gizmo he had attached to the passenger-side mirror. Anyone looking at it would think what an odd place to put an antenna. What it was actually doing was tracking energy readings, much like a sensitive would. When Tosh had shown it to her for the first time, the uneasiness must have shown on her face, because the technologist had dragged her to her work station and pointed at her terminal.

 

            “Can that replace me?”

 

            “Of course not!”

 

            “Why not? It can dig up information, correlate data, and draw up a list of possible outcomes…”

 

            Gwen had thrown up her hands, laughing. “All right, I get it!”

 

            Truth was, she had always been a bit intimidated by technologists. Oh, she knew how to use a computer, and was even half-way competent at troubleshooting, but people like Tosh and Ianto, who seemed to speak to them in their own language, seemed as far above her understanding as she was to a probationary constable.

 

            Different skills, Gwen, she told herself firmly. Different, not better or worse.

           

            “Over there!” Ianto nearly shouted,  pointing at one of the houses before dropping back with a muttered, “damn.”

 

            “What is it?” Jack asked.

 

            “The house is full of energy, all right, but it’s residual. There’s a stronger reading in that direction,” he pointed, “but it has a sense of… dislocation.”

 

            “Whatever it is, it’s being moved,” Jack said. He studied the small end-of-terrace cottage with its Madame Hermia, Spiritualist purple neon sign on the drawing room window. “All right, this is what we’ll do. You two keep after whatever it is. I’ll check with Madame Hermia.”

 

            He got out of the SUV and Gwen moved to the driver’s seat. “Where to, Ianto?”

 

            “Keep straight on.”

 

            She followed his instructions, doubling back several times until they found themselves hear the city centre. “Ianto, we won’t be able to drive. They’re setting up for the festival over the weekend. Most of the streets are closed… what is it?”

 

            Ianto had stiffened up like a shorthaired pointer. “There. That guy in the Newport RFC jacket? He has it.”

 

            She  swung the SUV into the nearest space. They followed the man on foot, trying their best to look like a couple out for a late afternoon stroll. The guy was easy to spot. He looked a bit like a scarecrow, skinny, with an oversized head on a stringy neck and dirty looking hair sticking out in every direction. He was trying to seem as casual as they, but was having far less success; he kept looking around as if the whole of the South Glamorgan constabulary was after him.

 

            Suddenly he stopped in front of a jeweller’s window, making a show of admiring the display. Gwen saw him pull something out of his pocket and look at it. Whatever it was made him jump around to scan both sides of the street until he was looking straight at them. Then he made a mad bolt in the opposite direction.

 

            “He’s making for the station!” she shouted as they gave chase. “You’re faster than I am. Get to the other entrance. We’ll bottle him inside.”

 

            Ianto nodded, not bothering with words as he turned down a side street at top speed. Gwen ran down the station stairs, pushing through the officer managers and investment bankers making their way home. She could see her quarry ahead of her, as trapped by the crowds as he was. Unfortunately, the corridor widened as they reached the second flight of stairs, and he was able to make a break for it. He ran down the steps, pushing people out of the way like ninepins. If he managed to get to the old-fashioned turnstile at the far end of the lobby she would lose him.

 

            She jumped the last few steps and lunged, grabbing a handful of his jacket. He twisted, smashing his fist into her side. The pain made her bend over, gasping for air, but she kept hold of the jacket. He twisted again in the other direction. She hung on, kicking at his legs blindly. Realizing he couldn’t shake her he pulled his arms from the jacket and ran up the stairs, leaving her with his jacket clutched to her chest.

 

            “Dammit, dammit,” she tapped her ear piece, “Ianto, where are you?”

 

            “On the upper concourse headed towards you. I don’t see him.”

 

            “You won’t. Bastard belted me and ran back up the same way he came in.”

 

            “I’m still registering the energy readings.”

 

            “Got his jacket.” She straightened up, wincing at the pain on her side. “I’ll wait for you here, right?”

 

            “Yeah.”

 

            She patted down the jacket. There was something in the inner pocket. She pulled the zipper and reached in.

 

            It was a small lady’s mirror with a silver frame and handle embossed with roses and studded with pearls and small rubies. It looked incredibly expensive; the sort of thing a wealthy woman kept on her dressing table for show. But instead of a pretty floral bouquet, or a lovely lady, the back supported a large ruby carved with the profile of a snake-headed woman. It chilled Gwen’s blood to look at it. She turned the mirror over.

 

            Where the glass should have been was a flat sheet of polished metal. In the background, small lights seemed to flicker on and off; her eyes were drawn to it and she couldn’t look away. Her lids closed slowly.

 

            When she opened them she was in an empty station. There were train noises in the background but she couldn’t see a single soul. The lights were dull and yellow, and she could see war posters on the wall. World War Two posters.

 

            Footsteps that sounded more like pistol shots made her turn towards the gates. A little boy wearing an old fashioned short-trouser suit and a cap walked up from one of the tracks. He was carrying a small suitcase and a twine-wrapped parcel. From the other hand dangled a tattered teddy bear. A large tag had been pinned on his shoulder with the name Tom Erasmus Flanagan written on it in block letters.

 

            “Hello? Who are you?” She whispered, voice trembling. “Can you hear me?”

 

            “I want to go home.” She could hear what he was thinking, what he was feeling.  “No one knows who I am here. I’m lost.” He turned away, desolate.

 

            “Come back.” She almost whimpered. “Come back.”

 

            “Gwen? Gwen!”

 

            She snapped back to the present to find Ianto standing in front of her, a slightly panicked look in his eyes. “Are you all right?”

 

            “No really.” She tried to smile. “I’ve just seen a ghost.”

 

            “Gwen… you’re a medium. You do that all the time.”

 

            “I know. It’s just… he wasn’t dead.”

 
 
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HoldinGoff[identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC)
“Gwen… you’re a medium. You do that all the time.”

I laughed at loud right there. Apparently Ianto's to-the-point attitude cross all planes of reality.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:38 am (UTC)
Well, yes. Ianto is Ianto everywhere!
[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 04:48 am (UTC)
Brilliant Start!!
I love that Ianto's more involved in this version and he's still so mysterious :D
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:39 am (UTC)
Thank you! You'll get to know a bit more about him as we go...
[identity profile] lirulien.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 05:29 am (UTC)
Merucha, honey, you are AWESOME *hug*



You know what I just CANNOT wait for? One guess?

Yeah you guess right, Cyberwoman *nod*

Every single time I saw one of TW's epi-rewrites, my head just went straight to "WHAT ABOUT IANTO???" Talk about obsessed!



I love this universe so far *heart* I think if the universe uses language instead of maths for science...maybe this would be what it looks like? Not sure though, since you do have computers and SUVs and guns...

Have I told you you are AWESOME? *lovelovelove*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! And a Carrionite universe? I think not! :D This is just a place where magic is one of the accepted tools; it is real and visible, so Christianity had to develop a bit differently...
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[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 05:29 am (UTC)
I love Tosh explaining to Gwen how machines can't replace them ... that last bit was brilliant ... Ianto is so Ianto...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:46 am (UTC)
I always wanted Tosh to be more verbal and self-assured... Just enough to not be an utter cypher in her personal life as she was in canon.
[identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 05:30 am (UTC)
great start. nice to ianto out of the hub working as a memeber of the team.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:46 am (UTC)
Thanks! It's a little different in my Universe!
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 06:15 am (UTC)
I love it when Ianto gets more involved, he wasn't in the original much at all ... brilliant, as always.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:47 am (UTC)
Thanks! In this Universe, Gwen is not kudzu. Everyone gets their share.
[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 07:14 am (UTC)
great start to the ep... wonderful
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] adira-tam.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 07:54 am (UTC)
just great ..I love how you get their voices
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:50 am (UTC)
You Tube is incredibly helpful with that. I will play bits and pieces of the episode sometimes if I feel I'm losing them...
[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 09:00 am (UTC)
It's not only a really interesting universe that you are creating, it's that your team is exactly like I wished it had been in the show. (hmmm. Does that make any sense? It did in my head..:-)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:51 am (UTC)
It does *nods*. I've been trying to rewrite them just enough so they are the people I loved, just... more fully realized.
[identity profile] criccieth.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:40 am (UTC)
still enjoying this. Whilst i'm far from being a Gwen fan, it's nice to see her being so very subtly DIFFERENT and yet so compeltely different if you follow me!! This is a Gwen who's instantly recognisable but she is also a Gwen who actually THINKS about the impact of her actions on others - and it results in a remarkable different (and much, MUCH more likeable) character.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 10:53 am (UTC)
It's just Gwen with the Mary-Sue removed! I just performed a little characto-surgery! *giggles*

Edited 2009-08-25 10:54 am (UTC)
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ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 12:05 pm (UTC)
That's great... and very lovely. Like everyone else, I agree that last line was so very Ianto.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 12:52 pm (UTC)
Ianto just comes through, honestly. Thanks! And thanks for the help last night!
(no subject) - [identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 12:57 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 01:05 pm (UTC)
Great start.

Edited 2009-08-25 01:06 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 01:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 01:11 pm (UTC)
Oh loved the description of the mirror.
This is proving veeeery interesting.

Keep it up.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 02:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] honey-felidae.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 05:07 pm (UTC)
Aw Great, and Ianto is great...(is he a demon? O_o a sarcastic little demon? who help because og selfish reasons?...i'm wierd)

but its great!
I love your writing style.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 05:27 pm (UTC)
Nope, he's not a demon. He's... more dangerous than that!
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[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 06:27 pm (UTC)
Love that Gwen is what she should have been all along and that Ianto is - well - Ianto.

I'm waiting for your take on Cyberwoman I have to admit (as are lots of others I'm sure).
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 06:33 pm (UTC)
I'm glad Gwen is shaping up the way I wanted her to be. As I told someone up thread I performed characto-surgery to remove the Mary-Sue...

Cyberwoman is to be called Hungry Heart. It departs a heck of a lot from the canon story. All it keeps is (1)Ianto has a girlfriend in trouble and (2)when Jack finds out about it he's really pissed off.
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 07:16 pm (UTC)
Ianto's last line is made of pure Welsh gold, just adore it!
this is a brillient AU, and I much prefer the characterizations to canon - I like your RealPerson Gwen and a confident Tosh is so lovely to see, Ianto is fantastic as usual and I can't wait for Hungry Heart
Looking forward to the next instalment :D
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 07:39 pm (UTC)
RealPerson Gwen: yes, that's what I was aiming for. And confident Tosh; not that she won't get dented; they all will. But she will not be a cypher.

I'm glad you're enjoying it!
(no subject) - [identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 07:55 pm (UTC)
ext_41651[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 08:46 pm (UTC)
This is wonderful, I loved the description of the mirror, and Ianto's line, very funny.

I have to say though, I'm a little worried about poor Ifan, how is he going?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 09:11 pm (UTC)
Biting my tail for not paying attention to him! I will do some work on that tonight!
[identity profile] srah-scottydog.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 11:00 pm (UTC)
Love =D
I adore Ianto in this, almost more than in the show, because of the more screen/fic time.

The bf saw me sneaking past the Over 18s Only thingy and was suspicious of the content =P
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 12:12 am (UTC)
It's very gen for now... it will get a bit more risque later on... but only a bit...
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 06:08 am (UTC)
Lovely start. And ooh... creepy mirror, nicely done!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 01:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 02:23 pm (UTC)
Oh, excited squee! :D Your voices are so perfect it's almost insane. I'm loving this 'magical' AU.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 02:44 pm (UTC)
I'm working very hard to keep them "in character"!