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Merucha ([personal profile] merucha) wrote2009-09-03 01:14 am

Torchwood Fic: Hungry Heart (4/4)

Title: Hungry Heart, Part Four of Four

Author: Emma

Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.

Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Summary: The team races to save Ianto’s life… and his soul
Author’s Note: Tosh’s perfume www.fragrantica.com/perfume/Guerlain/Samsara-55.html


Part One is here; Part Two is here; Part Three is here
 

           “Now.”

 

            Ianto had been waiting for Jack’s order, but it still chilled him to the soul. Lisa had been right in one thing; power was his for the taking. Sometimes the temptation was overwhelming. And now he would break his vow, and be damned, and he would do it willingly. His was the sin, and his the punishment.

 

            He dropped all his wards and fully opened his senses. They were all around him, and in the fashion of his father’s people he classified them: delicate Toshiko, an aspen in the wind; tough Owen, a Wych elm surviving the most hostile territory; supple Gwen, a silvery beech with her roots deep in the soil of South Wales; and Jack, a mighty sassile oak, standing strong against the storms.

 

            And Lisa. Tears ran down Ianto’s cheeks as he saw Lisa truly for the first time and saw the thing she had become. Powerful adult minds had fractured in Elaine de Cussac’s world; what could a sheltered, innocent sixteen-year-old have done? But now there was nothing there but the monster Elaine had created.

 

             In a way it made it easy. Her mind had been kept in a strange half-open state, ready to receive instruction. It was child’s play to go in and tweak Lisa’s reality into something just slightly different.

 

            “All right. Right now she believes she really did run away from Elaine because she was afraid. I can hold her for a while, but Elaine has done a great deal of… damage.” He turned away from them. “Once Elaine is close enough to try to influence Lisa directly I don’t know if it will hold. I’ve never done it, except…”

 

            He felt Toshiko’s hand on his back, a gentle caress that broadcast sympathy and support. He inhaled her spicy sweetness.  He had bought her the perfume one year for Christmas and she had loved it so much it had become “hers” in that odd way women had of reading their personality into a scent. It made him want to curl into her lap and cry. But he couldn’t touch her now. He was unclean.

 

            Lisa came upstairs with Gwen, looking scared and lost. Gwen’s quick nod told Ianto that she understood what was happening; well, Jack didn’t hire slow tops.

 

            “Ianto?”

 

            “We’re all right, Lisa. Jack is going to help us.” He hugged her to his side and kissed the top of her head. “Let’s go.”

 

             They emerged into a moonlit Plas. A small group of people, cloaked and masked, made a semicircle beyond the columns. In the center, a woman stood, holding a leash attached to the beaten and bloody body of a man sprawled at her feet. She was almost six feet tall, and her long red hair cascaded down her back to her waist. She wore a dress that hadn’t been seen in the British Isles in a thousand years.

 

            “Captain Harkness. I have wanted to meet you for a long time.”

 

            “I, on the other hand, could have done without ever knowing you. Let’s get this over with. Your servant in exchange for mine.”

 

            “This?”

 

            She jerked the chain. Andy’s head flopped back. Ianto could see one of his eyes had been nearly torn out of his socket, and the lower left side of his face had caved in. This was also his responsibility.

 

            “Yes.”

 

            “Only if I get Ianto also.”

 

            “Why?”

 

            “Don’t play the naïf, Captain, it doesn’t become you. His power will keep him alive for another thousand years. I want him.”

 

            Jack shrugged. “You can have him. But I warn you, he betrays masters and lovers with equal ease.”

 

            “I’ll deal with that. Trade?”

 

            “Trade.”

 

            She kicked at Andy. “Go to your master, dog.”

 

            Andy started crawling across the Plas. Ianto waited a minute then started towards him, dragging Lisa along with him. He knew the moment the glamour he had cast on Lisa’s mind banished. She started to struggle.

 

            “It’s a trap, Master! It’s a trap!”

 

            Ianto threw himself sideways, pulling her along with him into the shadows. At the same time the lights in the Plas flared up. Tosh had set them to mimic daylight. The screams of the vampires could be heard as the lights washed the columns in pure white. Then the lights died down and the Plas was again illuminated only by moonlight.

 

            “Elaine de Cussac!” Jack’s voice sounded a challenge in the sudden darkness. “Leave. Leave us alone and do not return here. There’s nothing here for you.”

 

            “I think not, Jack Harkness.” The master vampire replied in similar tones. “I think I will end this here and now and take my prizes with me after I have killed you.”

 

            She threw off her cloak and raised her arms. “I am Elaine, daughter of kings. I bring the storm and the lightning.”

 

            Thunderheads built behind her as she chanted. The water in the bay hissed and reared as the wind whipped around the columns. The sound of ghostly footsteps thundered across the flagstone. Gwen moaned and covered her ears.

 

            “This is who I am, Jack Harkness. This is what I bring. Show yourself!”

 

            “I am Jack, of the Harkness clan in the land of Dumfries. I come to stand for the land. And this I bring. Caledfwlch, the sword of kings. And the red dragon of Wales to guard my steps.”

 

            He brought the sword out from under his coat. As the moonlight caught the blade it seemed to catch on fire. Elaine screamed and covered her eyes. Above her, Myfanwy screeched a challenge.

 

            “Now, coward, let’s end this.” Jack mocked. “So afraid that you couldn’t even issue a challenge in your own name. Or is it because you know the land disowned you a thousand years ago?”

 

            “It can’t be! I buried it with him!”

 

            He laughed. “It’s in the nature of a loan, vampire. I went to his house and asked nicely.”

 

            She cowered as he approached. Some of her band tried to run to her side, but they were met by a hail of bullets from Owen, Tosh, and Gwen. The others ran into the dark streets beyond the Plas. Ianto struggled to control Lisa who fought him with all her strength. The master vampire tried to run too but it was as if the ground itself held her in place. The sword swung in a mighty arc and her head rolled onto the flagstones.  Ianto felt Lisa’s body shudder as her scream nearly shattered his eardrums. He rolled away from her.

 

            Jack dropped the sword and ran towards Andy. “Owen!”

 

            The doctor was already there, kneeling at Andy’s head. “He’s in bad shape, Jack. Move away, ok? Your energy is not in a good place right now. Tosh, come hold him.”

 

             Placing his hands on Andy’s chest, he began his examination. At each point of injury he smoothed and straightened and joined; Ianto could see the bones resetting and the skin closing with each pass of Owen’s hands. Finally, the Doctor sat back, shivering. “He’ll live. Jack, watch out!”

 

            Jack whirled around in time to see Lisa pick up the sword and give it to Ianto. He took it before he realized what she was asking. “Lisa, no.”

 

            “My mind is free for the very first time in years, Ianto. I know what I am. Please.”

 

            “Don’t ask him to carry the guilt.” Jack said. “There’s a better way.” He pointed upwards. “I can summon her to you. Dragon fire cleanses all, even sin. And it is quick.”

 

            She pushed Jack in Ianto’s direction. “Take him.”

 

            Jack dragged Ianto away as Myfanwy wheeled and then plunged, throat arching upwards and then down. A tongue of flame burst from between her jaws and washed over Lisa as she stood waiting, a smile on her lips. She threw her arms up as if to embrace her executioner. In a few seconds, there was nothing on the Plas but a very small pile of white ash.

 

            Ianto fell to his knees, offering Jack the sword, pommel first. “I do not deserve cleansing, but I do have the right to ask that you do this yourself.”

 

            Jack lifted the sword. As he did, a bell rung somewhere distant, almost like an echo. Tosh and Owen tried to run towards them, but Gwen pulled them back, pointing at the red glow that washed across the sky. Slowly, Jack brought the sword to touch Ianto’s neck, flat resting on the bone. Another bell joined the first, and then another.

 

            “Jack, no,” Ianto whispered. “Don’t do this.”

 

            “Ianto Jones, do you accept me as your liege lord?” When Ianto didn’t answer, jack pushed the blade just a little closer to the artery. “Ianto Jones, do you accept me as your liege lord?”

 

            Ianto wanted to scream denial, but the words wouldn’t come. Finally he bent his head in submission. “I accept you, Jack Harkness, as my liege lord. I am your vassal, of life and limb, to the end of my days. And may God have mercy on my soul.”

 

            As the sword tapped gently against his shoulder, he wept.
edited to correct a typo. what else is new?
ext_3690: Ianto Jones says, "Won't somebody please think of the children?!?" (drugs)

[identity profile] robling-t.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
This just keeps getting more and more insane and wonderful...

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
You know, in the average run of things, "insane" and "wonderful" don't usually fall into the same category... :D

[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow Oh wow. This was wonderful.

Poor Andy, I am glad Owen was able to fix him.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And Owen, as you can tell by now, is a Healer. He can fix most things...

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[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
Dragon Myfanwy...

wow, what an emotional roller coaster... I love this

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I wasn't sure I could pull it off.

[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thisis getting even more brilliantly twisted! Wow!
And Jack's now Ianto's liege lord? That's interesting, in a there's going to be fall out way. Love this fic!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes. Ianto and Jack are now faced with an impossible situation. They are in love but now allowed to express it... *giggles evilly*

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[identity profile] adira-tam.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 07:44 am (UTC)(link)
I adore Myfanwy being included,
this is getting more convoluted , more amazing each time.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:52 am (UTC)(link)
Well, Im trying to stick to canon in some ways, so Myfanwy had to be involved; and Owen, Tosh, and Gwen shooting, and Ianto bringing Lisa into the Hub... Everything else, of course...
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[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
How do you do this? After every chapter I think: this is brilliant! It can't get any better!
And then you post the next one...
I love this AU!
*Goes of to search the rest of yesterdays hankies*

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:53 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, and you can have new ones *hands over more hankies*.

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[identity profile] rednwhiterose.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
I less than three you so hard right now.

*silent squee*

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 11:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you're squeeing... I love it when my readers squee...
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[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
*alternates whimpers with happy screams* Wow! Yes! Wonderful! But how are you going to get them out of this tangle now?

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Like? Good. It will take a few parts but it will all come out right. :D
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[identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
wonderful job.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh WOW!!!... just... WOW!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Did I stun you good or did I stun you bad? Inquiring author wants to know! :D
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[identity profile] honey-felidae.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
DRagon, i like dragons! And this Dragon is so cool it pisses ice cubes.

and still one word
Twisted and evil.

but in a very good way.

so liege lord and servant...hm, that would be hard.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
And this Dragon is so cool it pisses ice cubes. *giggles insanely*

Yes> It will be. But it will get fixed at some point *grins*

[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh ... I expected angst between them but ... this is more than just a spanner in the works isn't it?

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 05:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, it is a mighty big spanner, yes, but it does get fixed... eventually...

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*wibbles*

And of course Owen's gift is Healing - it couldn't really be anything else!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
After I'd finished I thought boy did that come off angsty but then canon was not much happier! And of course Owen is a Healer as well as a Medical doctor.

[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved loved LOVED! Also, major squeeing. You always get squeeing. Squeeing is the product of Emma!fic. I adore this. Next story please! :D:D:D

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Next story is in plotting stages and the first part should be up by the weekend...

[identity profile] srah-scottydog.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow.

There's a Harkness clan?

Oh wow.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, there's a big Harkness family (spelled in many ways) from Dumfries. In some lists they are listed as a sept of the Douglas clan. Research is fun!

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[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my God. This was just splendid. I keep holding my breath with these stories.

I did get a bit confused as to exactly who Jack is? Or is that OK? Myfanwy as a red Welsh dragon, is there anything better?

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-03 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, you should by now: he's the son of a demon, he's a spirit Gate, he can carry Caledfwlch, and he can take vassals. Confusing? I hope so!

It's going well, isn't it? People seem to like them!
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[identity profile] holdingoff.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
Holy Hell!

Jack is getting a bit frightening here. He can carry Excalibur and then turns around and has Ianto swear fidelity using it? Damn, if that's a no escape clause, I don't know what is... Mother Katherine's geis won't hold a torch (bad pun) to that sort of oath.

Elaine used to be Morgaine, didn't she?

Way cool story (can't wait to see this universe deal with the fairies...)
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[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
He is at that. And, well, she's a composite of a couple, more like Morgaine/Nimue. But of course those are the later names, the "frenchified" names, and as a Welsh friend once said "and who's that pussy Lancelot anyway?" :D

And as far as the sword, well, remember, Jack tells her he went to the owner's house and asked for it as a loan. And earlier on Jack and Owen come out of one of the tunnels and Owen looked spooked... this will bear watching for later stories...
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[identity profile] lirulien.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 10:24 am (UTC)(link)
The first sentence of the fourth paragraph: It a way it made it easy -- do you mean "In a way..."?

...Are you going to tell me Jack = King Arthur? And why are Jack and Ianto not allowed to express their love? PS: you said "They are in love but now allowed to express it"...

And four parts for this episode is tooooooooo SHORT!!!!!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
No, I'm not going to tell you that! The sword is a loaner, remember? And there's an explanation of why they can't in the next story...

Thanks for the catch. There's always something!

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I love that Myfanwy is a dragon :) This fic just gets better and better.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Well, I wanted to keep her but since the Rift is not a time-traveling device in this one, it had to be a pseudo-mythological creature...

[identity profile] cprefect.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, And I give you 5 squee's!


I just caught up and can't wait till you write more.


Please, let there be Janto.... please




[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-04 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course there will be Janto. This is a retelling of the canon, remember? *smishes squees*

[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
holy shit woman! wow. Great update.

“I am Jack, of the Harkness clan in the land of Dumfries. I come to stand for the land. And this I bring. Caledfwlch, the sword of kings. And the red dragon of Wales to guard my steps.”

*Happy Pagan Priestess Dance*

*fans self*

yes please! any freakin' day! Dude... oh, right I was supposed to be cooling offf... um... dont think so. My brain melted into goo. too many awesome ideas in this! Oh gods the magic and the possibilities and Yum!

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Wait until you find out how he got the sword... *smirks evilly*

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[identity profile] faelivrinn.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Could you please explain what happened at the end with the liege lord stuff? I didn't really understand that part ^^;

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
It'll get explained in the next story, don't worry...

[identity profile] gingerlr.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Ouch for Andy! Another great update.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 04:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] minimumstitch.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely wonderful.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com 2009-09-06 01:28 pm (UTC)(link)
oh wow, feel like I am just comming down from a thrill after I finnished that.

That was just brilliant.

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com 2009-09-06 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It's nice to know I got the effect I wanted!

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