05 September 2009 @ 12:32 am
Torchwood Fic: Changeling (2/4)  

Title: Changeling, Part Two of Four

Author: Emma

Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.

Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.

Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?

Summary: A young girl’s mysterious history could bring disaster to Cardiff and Torchwood Three…

Author’s Note: Jack is speaking Scots Gaelic: Gonadh. An robh iadsan cuthach? means Damn. Were they mad? Or at least that’s the best I can do. [info]srah_scottydog , if I screwed up the grammar, please let me know.


Part One is here 

            Gwen sipped her tea and tried to relax.  In spite of what she had told Jack, she still didn’t feel very comfortable in official Church premises. Not that there was anything overtly religious about Kathy Swanson’s office, save for the photo of the investigator receiving her Symbols from Mother Katherine. Otherwise it was a cop’s place through and through.

 

            “You all right, Gwen?” Jack asked.

 

            “Yeah. Its’ just that… if anyone had told me two months ago I was going to be eating sweets made especially for me by the Bishop’s cook and drinking tea with the Bishop’s witch hunter I would have chucked them into a cold shower to sober up.”

 

            He grinned. “Stick with me, baby and you’ll go places.”

 

            “Ask lots of questions before you accept.” Kathy Swanson swept into her office. “I didn’t and look where it got me. This is Aaron ben Joseph, my assistant. He was primary on the Pierce investigation.”

 

            “I am primary half the time,” the young man said in tones that would have done Ianto proud. “There’s only two of us in the office.”

 

            “Hush,” Swanson said. “Sit down and tell them what you told me.”

 

            “Yes, ma’am.” He plopped down on the chair, more like an overgrown puppy than a grown man. “The accusation was nonsense, of course. Whatever is going on with Jasmine Pierce has nothing to do with dark arts. But…”

 

            “But you think there’s something wrong.”

 

            Ben Joseph looked at his boss, who growled, “All of it, Aaron.”

 

            “According to the girl who brought the accusation, Jasmine seduced and then killed two men using dark arts. The mother, who is…”

 

            “An imbecile,” supplied Swanson.

 

            “Indeed. The mother alleged that the girl’s beauty had to be some sort of spell. We tested for every possible sort of dark magic and the girl was as clean as Mother Katherine herself. Those two went off to their confessor with their tails between their legs, let me tell you. Father Anselm is not one to hold his tongue. That ended the our office's official involvement. But there were some details in the girl’s story that tickled my memory so I did some research on my own.”

 

            “And you found?” Jack asked.

 

            “Two men were reported missing during that month. One, William Goodson, was a convicted pedophile. He was last seen at Cardiff Hospital PICU, trying to get himself committed. He told them he was being followed by spirits. The attending physician had just had to certify the suicide of a young boy and he was not in the mood for what he called histrionics. He told Goodson off and had him chucked out. His body was found four months later… in the woods where Jasmine plays.”

 

            “And the other man?”

 

            “Peter Jones. A sad loser with a history of bad choices. Lived with his mother and worked at a video store. Was a photography nut, and, I think, could have made something of himself if he had been more likely to take pictures and less likely to get pissed every night. He’s never been found. I visited his mother and found a stack of photos. A lot of them were of children, candid snapshots, rather sugary calendar stuff. Among them were four pictures of Jasmine.”

 

            “You said something had tickled your memory,” Gwen said. “What was it?”

 

            “The girl said the men were killed by stuffing their throats with rose petals.” Jack’s harsh intake of breath had him nodding. “I see you’ve heard of it too.”

 

            “What is it?” Gwen asked.

 

            “There’s an obscure Scottish legend about a man who dared lay hands on a child of the sidhe.” ben Joseph said. “He was punished by being choked to death with rose petals.”

 

            “No legend.” Jack said. “It happened a few miles from where I was born and it was my grandfather who had to untangle the mess.”

 

            “Ah.” ben Joseph seemed to file the information away. “The thing is, when they found Goodson’s body there were rose petals all over the place… including this mouth.”

 

            Jack stood up, extending his hand to the younger man. “Thank you, Mr. ben Joseph.”

 

            “My pleasure. I’ve been wanting to meet you for years.”

 

            “Get that look out of your eyes, Jack Harkness.” Swanson snapped. “I’m not losing any more staff to Torchwood. Aaron, off with you.”

 

            “This isn’t good, is it, Jack?” Swanson asked once the door closed behind her laughing associate.

 

            “I don’t think so, no. I’ll keep you informed, Kathy.”

 

            Traffic was still light and Gwen let Jack indulge his passion for fast driving – after making sure both her shoulder and lap belts were tightly secured – without complaint; well, except for the time where he squeezed between two lorries, shooting past them and leaving behind a number of inventive curses in both in Welsh and English. At that point she tried to verbally take a strip of hide or two off the man, but he just laughed at her. 

 

            When they got to the Hub they found Owen and Tosh still deep into research. Jack stopped cold and looked around. “Where’s Ianto?”

 

            “Archives. He’s still on his organizing kick.” Tosh said. “And I have two puzzles for you.”

 

            He took off his coat and tossed it negligently on the sofa. “Tell me.”

 

            “First puzzle: why would a successful musician destroy his career by moving and changing his name?” She pushed a button and a man’s face filled her monitor. “This is David Pierce McCrimmon, piper and harpist, originally from Inverness. According to my information the McCrimmons are famous musicians?”

 

            “You could say that,” Jack laughed. “They are considered the greatest piping clan in history, hereditary pipers to the McLeods of Dunvegan for about a thousand years. I have a McCrimmon for a great-great grandfather.”

 

            “Well, this McCrimmon married a nice Welsh girl and took her back home. Two years later, soon after the birth of his first child, he moved his family back to Wales, dropped the McCrimmon, and became just Pierce.”

 

            “Umm. And the second puzzle?”

 

            “How does a family that registered a son, David Pierce McCrimmon the second, in Inverness, arrive in Cardiff with a daughter, Jasmine Elizabeth?”

 

            Gwen looked up from the book she was leafing through. “Are you sure?”

 

            “Absolutely. Why?”

 

            “I’ve been thinking about what Estelle and Aaron ben James said.” She checked off each item on her fingers. “An exquisite girl who attracts a lot of resentment from other girls, who spends a lot of time in the woods, who doesn’t seem to care if her Mother doesn’t pay any attention to her, who may have a protector who eliminates anyone who is a danger to her…”

 

            “You’re thinking of a changeling.”  Jack said. “But why hide? If a fairy steals a child, there are ways to force its return. A McCrimmon would be sure to get a hearing in front of the Seelie Court, even the Unseelie Court if it comes to that… Gonadh. An robh iadsan cuthach?"

 

            “Who were mad?” Ianto asked as he came out of the tunnel leading to the Archives.

 

            “The McCrimmons. Pierces. Whatever. Tosh, do you have a picture of Jasmine?” She nodded. “Put it up, would you?”

 

            The image was of a tall, slender girl with masses of silver-blond hair cascading to her waist and long, elegant limbs. She looked as if she would glide instead of walk. There was a distant look in her dark blue eyes as if she were listening to far-away voices. 

 

            “Estelle was right.” Gwen said. “She is stunning. Jack, are you all right?”

 

            “No.” Jack’s voice was hoarse and he reached out a hand to Ianto, who clasped it between his own. “Tosh, audio link to Mainframe, please. Mainframe, file, Harkness, Jack, personal, document, fairies, sub doc Mab. Split screen with current image.”

 

            The side-by-side images could have been different versions of the same person.

 

            “You were right, Gwen. We’re talking about a changeling. Except that it wasn’t the fairies who stole a boy and left a girl. The McCrimmons stole a fairy child and left their boy in her place. And not just any fairy child. The drawing is of Queen Mab of the Unseelie Court. That’s her granddaughter, who went missing eleven years ago.”

 
 
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Sam: bat[identity profile] robling-t.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 05:05 am (UTC)
"I have a McCrimmon for a great-great grandfather"

And would we know this McCrimmon...? ;)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 05:06 am (UTC)
Well, yes, we would, but in this AU it's a little different... it's all a little different...
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 05:11 am (UTC)
Ooh so Jasmine is the granddaughter of the Fairy Queen. Cool.

Question: Was Jack using Ianto as an mental/emotional Anchor.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:30 am (UTC)
Some of these questions will be answered in the next part... but yes, they are linked now by much more than just their desire and love...
[identity profile] xennie-b.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 05:20 am (UTC)
O.O Very Cool!!
I love this twist!! Plus the Fairy Queen Mab!!
Brilliant!!

p.s I second luvinthe88and20's questions :)

Edited 2009-09-05 05:24 am (UTC)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:31 am (UTC)
Thank you! And look up at her answer!
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 06:16 am (UTC)
Dude!! Humans STOLE Queen Mab's Daughter?!? Are they fraking NUTS?! way to get yourself killed repeatedly for the rest of several lifetimes! ouch!

good update, nice variation on the original story.

oh... and I found your typo for this chapter - do I get a cookie?
"passion for past driving" - I assume you meant "fast" :D especially given who was driving :)

[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:35 am (UTC)
Thank you! It's her grand-daughter and yes, it was,,, unwise, yes? And I think my subconscious has decided to play games with me and everyone else! *offers sister Enid's chocolate macadamia biscuits*
(no subject) - [identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 06:08 pm (UTC)
ext_41651[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 06:39 am (UTC)
Oh lovely, I really like where you have taken this, such an interesting take on the fairy story. Also I felt very happy about Jack needing Ianto, I assumed he needed him as soon as he got back to the Hub? I noticed in the hungry heart that Ianto felt Jack close his mind to him, so they must have made up, yes?

Do you mind if I friend you as I've developed a bit of an addiction here. I know friending in this context is enabling..
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:37 am (UTC)
Please friend! There's no question of enabling... I don't think I could stop these if I tried!

And as far as making up -- it's a bit more complicated than that.
Next part you'll see...
(no subject) - [identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 12:35 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 07:08 am (UTC)
What kind of people gives up their own kid to steel a fairy?
Jack speaks welsh! (I didn't notice till now)
Queen Mab! and Jack still relying on Ianto for support!
*sigh* Good chapter!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:40 am (UTC)
Jack speaks Scots. Similar but with more vowels! :D Thank you! And your first question... answered next!
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[identity profile] samstjames.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 07:13 am (UTC)
Fascinating idea to twist the idea of a changeling that way. Duh... there's an abyss.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] adira-tam.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 07:16 am (UTC)
OK..family of IDIOTS here..stealing Queen Mabs granddaughter...
(even if they didn't know at the time..)
Jack immediately looking for Ianto when he arrives back at the Hub, and reaching for him when he had the answer to his query.


loving this, such a interesting way to follow the series
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:41 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 09:24 am (UTC)
I still love this... I'm not very imaginative with my praises but I really look forward to your fics!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 10:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! Appreciation is always welcome in whichever way it is given!
[identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 11:26 am (UTC)
Kidnapping the Unseelie Court's Princess? Somebody must have been having their brains nibbled by hamsters to think that was a good idea.
Interesting to see Jack looking for Ianto more now and hanging onto his hand. More twisty plot ahead? Lovely!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 01:54 pm (UTC)
Yes, definitely more twisty plot ahead! Thanks!
(no subject) - [identity profile] cen-sceal.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 02:00 pm (UTC)
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 12:20 pm (UTC)
Oh my damn, someone seriously lost there mind there. :) Liked the little subtle touches about Jack needing Ianto. And I think I know where the McCrimmons came from. Emphasis on think... very, very nice... but why am I expecting the proverbal stick to hit the traditional air moving device? *grin*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 01:56 pm (UTC)
Because you know me? :D And the McCrimmons are from the Isle of Skye :D :D
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[identity profile] rednwhiterose.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 12:46 pm (UTC)
Is there anyway you could provide a link (perhaps in the Author's Notes) to the mythology and lore you're referencing. There are times when I feel like I'm missing important details because I don't know anything about the lore you're using.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 02:32 pm (UTC)
I'm sorry. My fault. I'm writing these very fast to be very short and compact, so maybe I'm not putting in enough details. I'll do better in the future. But in this one: Scottish fairies are traditionally divided into the Seelie (blessed) Court, which are basically the "nice" fairies and the Unseelie (unblessed) Court, which are not very nice at all. Queen Mab is a fairy first mentioned by Shakespeare and who over centuries of telling and retelling has become identified with the Unseelie Court. The best modern representation of it is in IMO, Jim Butcher's series. She's notoriously not someone you want to piss off.

A changeling is a fairy child left behind when a fairy steals a human child. In this case... it's the other way around.

And all the fuss about "McCrimmons" in the comments is because one of the Doctor's Companions in the classic series was a Jamie McCrimmon who was piper to the "McLarens". And yes, in this AU, Jack is descended from him. We'll probably find out more later.

I hope that brings you up to speed. I promise to tie things up better in the future installments.

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Twincityhacker: Alternate History[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 12:47 pm (UTC)
McCrimmons! Both Courts! Crazy linkages! But my favorite is Jack speaking Scots Gaelic. And, uh, that the photographer's death may imply that Estelle will live this time.

Celtic languages love battling out with Estelle love. Can't decide!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 02:33 pm (UTC)
I'm not making any secret of the fact that Estelle lives. Screw Canon!!!!! (Ok, I've screwed with it enough already, but... you know what I mean). I'm glad you're enjoying this.
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[identity profile] cprefect.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 01:51 pm (UTC)
Oh wow,

You are absolutely brilliant!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 02:34 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thank you!
[identity profile] criccieth.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 01:57 pm (UTC)
umj - if Jack has Jamie McCrimmon for a great-great-grandfather that makes him.....

(1646, so say 1650 for Jamie's child so about 1700 for Jamie's g-grandchild......)

old?
Twincityhacker: Cheesemaking[identity profile] msp-hacker.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 02:18 pm (UTC)
Yeah, that native Scots Gaelic in very, very south Scotland is Suspicious in this regard too. I mean, you do have language revivalists all over, and it's possible to have small enclaves of speakers, but it's still a bit odd.

Completely lovely, but odd.

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[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 04:20 pm (UTC)
Oh can I tell you I just love all of this ... the Scottish lore is breathtaking (says the girl who grew up on that rather than Disney) and the subtly of the Jack/Ianto dynamic is also very present.

I love Kathy in this ...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 04:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you! For a girl who has absolutely no Scots in her at all I am obssessed with the place. Visit whenever I can afford to and study the archaeology and everything I can get my hands on. I'm saving to buy a small place in the Isles -- hopefully Skye but maybe Raasay...

And I wanted Kathy to be in it in a more substantial fashion...
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
Stealing THE Unseelie's grandchild? NOT a good idea you silly people.

Love this - and so nice to see a bit of Gaelic!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 5th, 2009 07:33 pm (UTC)
Ain't it though? But there's a reason... I'm glad you like it. And the Gaelic is something I've always wanted to learn. Like Welsh I know words and some phrases but that's it.
[identity profile] gingerlr.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 01:51 am (UTC)
As the plot thickens...

Stealing a fairy child is not the smartest thing to do, folks. Not a smart thing.
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[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 03:18 am (UTC)
I didn't think so :D
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[identity profile] cookiesofkarma.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 12:52 pm (UTC)
Glad to see everything's going wrong. :D But at least Jack knows what's going on. Nice to see you've given Kathy a bigger role; she was a great character. Loving these updates. :D
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 02:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm with you about Kathy; I wanted more of her. So there will be!
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 01:08 pm (UTC)
I read these chapters in the wrong order but woah, this is good.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com on September 6th, 2009 11:59 pm (UTC)
banter back forth in kathy's office, always have been a big swanson fan. made me smile to see the reference back to early who series and jamie and the thought that jack is related. adore the au look at what might have happened and mixing of various lores of of the isles. love your jack and ianto. started reading the dresden books because of another fic and agree if you wanted a glimpse of the dark side of the fairy tale look there.
what made them think that would get away with stealing mab's granddaughter? think it would be safer to steal the crown jewels.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 7th, 2009 12:36 am (UTC)
There are reasons... you'll see.

And I love Kathy and thought what the hell I'll give her her due... so she'll show up much more often than she does in canon.

I'm glad you're enjoying this. I didn't think I could pull it off!

Edited 2009-09-07 12:37 am (UTC)
[identity profile] srah-scottydog.livejournal.com on September 23rd, 2009 09:57 pm (UTC)
I'm still chuckling at the idea that I'd know Gaelic XD

BUT! I ran it past my friend, who went to the Gaelic primary in Glasgow and is now doing the Advanced Higher. She says it's right, congratulations :)

I wouldn't say it's entirely inconcievable that the Borders would know Gaelic... if it was the central belt I'd say nae chance, we spoke Scots, no aht teuchter crap!
But in the rural areas I can imagine it happening... suppose you can make it up though :D
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on September 23rd, 2009 10:22 pm (UTC)
Hey, I figure it's a totally new Universe, so I can get to play... I've been studying Gaelic -- to read, pronunciation might take the rest of my life! -- and it seemed the right thing!

And how have you been? Not heard from you in a while!

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