18 January 2010 @ 09:14 am
Captain James Harper (3/4)  

Title: Captain James Harper (3/4)
Author: Emma
Characters: Canonical Torchwood Three members… sort of.
Rating: Some chapters definitely not safe for work.
Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?
Summary: The darkness gathers, but the team finds strength in each other...
Author’s Note: http://www.new-age.co.uk/welsh-burial-chambers.htm Tinkinswood and St.Lythans...

Author's Note: I'm sorry this is taking so long but to tell the truth I'm a little scared of screwing this one up!

Part One is here; Part Two is here

“Ianto!”

Owen’s shout made Gwen look up in time to see Ianto crumple to the floor. Ever since Rhys had arrived in the Hub, she had been sitting on his lap in the ratty old sofa, his big arms wrapped around her, her head tucked securely in the space between his neck and shoulder. She had laughed at his startled what the fuck? when he had first spotted Myfanwy, and nearly cried when she felt his hands stroking up and down her spine. Ianto had put coffee mugs on the table in front of them and told them to stay put until Jack returned or someone had to visit the facilities, whichever came first. Then he had ducked her swat and walked away, snickering.

She jumped up and ran to him, Rhys close behind. Owen was already there, hands moving fast as he scanned Ianto's body.

“He's clammy,” he told Gwen. “I would say shock, but that the way his eyelids are flickering makes me think he's having a precognitive incident. Except that he's not any sort of clairvoyant. Hold on to him, will you? Sometimes people in this condition will start to convulse.”

Gwen grabbed Ianto's hands. “Ianto? Sweetheart? Please come back to us.” She felt Rhys kneel behind her and place his hands over hers. “Ianto?”

His eyes flickered even faster then suddenly he opened them. For a second or two they were solid blue, with no white showing; then, just as suddenly, they were normal again. He took a deep breath and started to sit up.

“No, Owen, don't fuss. I'm fine. Gwen, let go of my hands, I'm going to need them. Rhys, someone fouled your testing. We'll need to send you to the Episcopal Board as soon as it may be, but not today. We're going to need you here.”

“Ianto!” Owen shook him slightly. “Slow down. What's going on?”

“Something has taken Jack.”

The words, delivered in Ianto's calmest tone, sent a burst of terror through Gwen. “What do you mean, gone?”

“He's no longer of this side of the Wall.” Ianto scrambled to his feet and helped Gwen up. “No, Gwen, don't panic, he's alive. We'll get him back. Owen...”

“How do you know?” Rhys broke in. “That he's alive, I mean?”

Ianto rubbed his chest. “I know. Owen, call Andy. He and Rhys can help you hold the fort while Gwen and I go out to St. Lythans.”

“You think something's going to happen while Jack is... gone?” Gwen asked.

“Can you think of any other reason to remove him? All those people who have been telling us about the coming darkness... we thought it was coming for Jack. A personal thing, because of his father. But what if it's coming for everyone? For the earth itself?”

Gwen shivered. “Jack could be our first and last line of defense.”

“Yeah. Rhys, you can use a computer.” Ianto pushed Rhys into Tosh's chair. “I'm going to start a program running.” He tapped out a sequence of commands. “See these numbers here? Keep an eye on them. If you see them start to fluctuate, Owen will need to know. If this top number here goes past +5 you hit this button right here.”

“What is it doing?” Rhys asked, nearly pressing his nose to the screen as he tried to read the numbers flashing by.

“It's monitoring Rift openings. Fluctuations means the openings are getting bigger and unstable. Plus five means all Hell is breaking loose. Literally. The button is a... desperate move. Don’t think about it, don’t second guess. Hit it.”

Rhys swallowed hard. “All right.”

“Andy's on his way.” Owen ended his call. “He says to do a quick search into the files before you go anywhere. One of his Tad’s earliest cases had to do with St. Lythans. He remembers his Tad being spooked by it.”

Ianto moved to his own terminal. “Here we go. Davidson, field reports. St. Lythans… here it is. A couple was seen wandering around St. Lythans’ Road, wearing what looked like Victorian clothes. Several people spoke to them. They seemed confused about where they were and what was happening but did give their names as Doctor and Mrs. Harlan Macris. Someone sent for the police, but by the time they got there the Macrises had disappeared. A local farmer and his wife reported seeing them going into the grounds of the St. Lythans’ Hotel and talking to the proprietor. And that’s it. It was a low-priority thing so when the police filed a report with us, it got handed to the junior staff. Davidson did manage to get a picture. It seems the farmer’s son had gotten a camera for Christmas.”

The photo showed three people standing in front of the St. Lythans’ Hotel. The Macrises were clearly wearing the epitome of Victorian elegance. The other, a slender, elderly man, wore a smoking jacket with a red cravat. “The third man was identified as Bilis Manger, the manager of the St. Lythans.”

Gwen leaned in over his shoulder. “Ianto, can you enlarge that window in the hotel? The right-hand one, yeah. There’s someone standing there.”

Ianto zoomed in. The window was open. A woman was leaning out slightly, arm extended as if to wave at passersby. As the magnification increased even more and the face became clear, Gwen gasped and Owen swore.

It was Toshiko.


They followed James Harper back into the hotel and into the cafe in the back. Jack was surprised to find a real fin de siecle room, with gilded mosaic walls, plush red banquettes against the walls and ironwork tables and chairs in the center. An exquisite bar ran the length of the back wall. There was no bartender or waiters; food and drink appeared at random intervals, and dirty plates and glasses disappeared, but no matter how hard you tried you couldn't see the exact moment it happened. The guests – as they called themselves for lack of a better word – ranged from an upper-crust Victorian couple to a Roman legionnaire.

“James was right,” Jack sat down next to Tosh, who was occupying one of the banquettes, netbook on the table in front of her. “Nobody I spoke to remembers how long they have been here.”

“Same here,” Tosh said, “but I did get an interesting bit of information from Mrs. Macris. She and her husband were walking in the garden one day and suddenly they found themselves in a road full of terrible horseless carriages. The people who spoke to them sounded odd, threatening. They were terrified and fled back into the grounds, but they couldn't find their way to the hotel itself until Mr. Manger arrived to take them back.”

“And that tells you something?”

“It tells me that Manger shuts down whatever it is that's holding us in when he needs to get in and out to the real world. And that means...”

“It's mechanical, not magical.”

“More like a combination of both. There are several possibilities, but they depend on Manger's level of Talent. Whichever it ends up being, it needs some sort of energy wave generator.” She patted the netbook. “And that can be detected by my baby here. I'm going for a walk.”

Tosh grabbed her purse and stood up. Jack held her wrist for a second; she smiled down at him and nodded. He watched her leave. She stopped once or twice to speak to one of the other women. Mrs. Macris laughed and pointed. Tosh made a gesture and dashed out, looking exactly like a desperate woman who had finally figured out where the ladies' facilities were.

“She is quite beautiful.” Captain Harper slid into the seat Toshiko had vacated. “Is she your woman?”

“No.”

“There's no one special, then?”

“Yes. There is.” Jack smiled at him. “But he doesn't expect me to be blind.”

“I wish to God I could say the same. But in my time...” The Captain tossed back his drink. “It wasn't a cloud I hit, was it? My plane crashed.”

Jack took the Captain's hand in his and twinned their fingers. “I think so, yes.”

“And I never even got to...” He tightened his grip. “It was too dangerous, you see.”

“I know.” Jack lifted their joined hands to his lips. “I'll make you a promise. Before it's all over, you will.”

“What is his name?”

“Ianto.”

“You're a lucky man, Jack.”

“I know.”


Tosh stared at the readout. She had followed the netbook's signal upstairs and to the small room at the end of the corridor. It was the most impersonal room Tosh had ever seen. A desk and two chairs sat in one corner; a cot covered with a white sheet and a thin white blanket, a bedside table and a small lamp in the other. There were no photos, paintings, or curtains. Not even an alarm clock, and Tosh didn't think anyone could live without one of those. A thin coat of dust covered everything.

She turned in a big circle, holding the netbook balanced on the palm of her hand. As she swept by the window it emitted a loud series of beeps. She repeated the movement and it happened again.

She crouched down to examine the floor below the window. Four small impressions in the dust showed something had sat there very recently. The window frame had two deep indentations where clamps had been applied to the wood.

She opened the window. Even from this height, she could not see over the wall of fog that surrounded the St Lythans. She looked up. The sky remained a flat dirty gray sheet with a few darker spots where clouds should have been. A lone falcon hovered above, riding the thermals with its wings spread wide.

Suddenly she remembered what the kitsune had said: the Hunters can cross what we cannot. Peregrines were notoriously bad tempered loners; she didn't know whether she could even attract its attention. But with the energy wave generator gone, it might be the only chance she and Jack would have.

Rummaging in her purse she found some paper, but no pencil or pen. The desk's drawers were empty except for a small letter opener. She considered her options and then, before she could think about it, she stabbed the opener into the pad at the base of her left thumb. Blood swelled immediately. She dipped her right index nail in it and scribbled her message. She blew on it to dry, then rolled it tightly.

She ran back to the window and looked up, concentrating. It was slow work; the peregrine's mind was full of the thrill of the wind and the hunt. She pushed harder, relentlessly. Finally, he plummeted towards her with a shrill cry, to come rest on her arm.

What do you want, female?

To ask your help. Please. The one who lords over this place keeps us prisoner. We cannot feel the wind. We cannot hunt.

That is an evil deed, but what can I do about it?

You can take a message to my cast that they might come to my aid.

That I will do.
It closed its claws firmly around the small roll of paper. How shall I know them?

She showed him images of Ianto, Gwen, Andy, and Owen. Any of them.

I will seek, then.

Tosh leaned out of the window, holding her arm out stiffly to allow the take off, and then watched the falcon fly upwards until he disappeared into the sourceless gray.
 
 
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[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 02:56 pm (UTC)
Oh I hope the Peregrine can get the message to the others, this is riveting!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 03:09 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you like it. I worried about this particular episode...
[identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 06:40 pm (UTC)
Oh you have NO need to worry, its Awesome!
[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 03:02 pm (UTC)
Ooh I like Jack being upfront about his relationship between him and Ianto.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 03:10 pm (UTC)
My Jack is not so confused about his own feelings... or maybe it's just that I don't like to contradict myself as I go :D

Edited 2010-01-18 03:11 pm (UTC)
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 04:12 pm (UTC)
Oh lovely... I like using the falcon as a messenger. Very innovative.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 04:20 pm (UTC)
Considering Tosh's Talent, I thought it would make sense. I'm glad it worked!
ext_116536[identity profile] beth-mccombs.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 04:34 pm (UTC)
It did... you did good.
rhianona: bloody torchwood[personal profile] rhianona on January 18th, 2010 05:04 pm (UTC)
oh interesting idea! Nice to use Tosh and her skills in this way to get the message to her people. And Jack... I guess he never changes, does he?
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 05:47 pm (UTC)
Well, if you mean "never loses his appetite for a gorgeous thing", no, he doesn't. On the other hand, he does not deny there's someone special in his life... nor does he cheat.
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 08:51 pm (UTC)
"nor does he cheat"

Phew I'm glad you clarified that, I was a bit worried there.

Great that Tosh uses her talent to get the message out. And that Ianto knew when Jack had been taken from their connection.



Edited 2010-01-18 08:57 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 01:35 am (UTC)
Yes. That is the LITERAL truth. He does not cheat.
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 06:24 am (UTC)
Hmm, I have a feeling you are still up to something but as long as it doesn't hurt Ianto...
ext_41651: Pensive Jack[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 08:09 pm (UTC)
Oh what a brilliant idea for the message! I love that. Also I like the interaction between James and Jack, very subtle. Thing is this is an ep I mainly like for what happens between Ianto and Owen, I find the Jack/Real Jack thing just ridiculous, So I love what you have done here.

Also, nice touch with Ianto touching his chest and knowing Jack is alive.
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 08:56 pm (UTC)
"I find the Jack/Real Jack thing just ridiculous"

Thank goodness I'm not the only person who thinks this - I never agreed with the whole 'Jack falls in love with the Real Jack' interpretation of this episode that most people have. I know I'm in the minority.

Edited 2010-01-18 08:57 pm (UTC)
ext_41651: Dance with text[identity profile] fide-et-spe.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 09:30 pm (UTC)
Do you think? I find that often when I make a comment like this, people agree. It's just that I can buy the whole premise, but can't buy two men kissing on the dance floor in 1941. I think I would have bought it if they went somewhere private. Also I think Jack was just feeling guilty and wanted to give the poor guy something, still he would have been arrested and Jack would know better, it's all a bit silly.
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 10:46 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I can go with the whole Jack feeling guilty idea and that's why he kissed him, or the give him something knowing he was going to die the next day line of thought but kissing on the dance floor in front of all his men! Jack had lived through the 40's - twice - he would have known the problems this sort of behaviour would cause, not only with the law, but with the respect of his men. In my forties story Jack and Ianto barely touch in public for fear of recriminations.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 01:38 am (UTC)
Since there's been a conversation (looove it) I'd like to add my two cents. I figured that my own personal interpretation of that particular piece of ahistory would be that since these two strangers appeared out of nowhere and banished into a bright light, half the people in the dance hall thought it was a hallucination and the other half thought they were angels. Either way, nobody was going to be looking too closely at the events...
[identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 06:30 am (UTC)
I can see where you are coming from with the angel/hallucination thing but it would still be a very irresponsible act on Jack's part because he wouldn't know how his actions would be percieved.
[identity profile] riftghost.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 04:29 am (UTC)
It is probably my least favorite episode. I'm not sure what people see in it; I don't get the wonderful love story.

I love this rewrite. I'm interested in that line about Rhys. Can't wait for more.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 04:48 am (UTC)
Thank you! It was, I think, a homage to the romantic story of the WWII type -- the doomed soldier story. And Rhys -- you'll see.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 04:46 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm a sucker for macguffins and details...
[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 08:13 pm (UTC)
I don't know what you are worried about. This is gorgeous.

The interplay between Jack and James is so right - Jack knows his own feelings, but he also knows Ianto.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 01:40 am (UTC)
Thank you! One of the things that didn't sound right about the original was the "there's no one" line from Jack. He had been the one pushing the relationship, in a way; he's definitely the pursuer; in Countrycide he's furious when Ianto says that Lisa was the last one to kiss him... In a sense, the stopwatch scene was Ianto letting himself be caught. So why would he say that to Captain Jack? Stupid and demeaning, but, hey.... My Jack is not an idiot.
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 08:38 pm (UTC)
oooh! yummy! Lots of great bits in this chapter. This 'verse just gets richer with each piece you write, I love it!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 01:40 am (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com on January 18th, 2010 10:13 pm (UTC)
Fantastic chapter, great way of getting message out, using the Peregrine.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 01:41 am (UTC)
One of my aims in this 'Verse is to have each one develop their talents and use them properly So, for me, this was the best way of Tosh to send her message.

I'm very glad you're enjoying this!

Edited 2010-01-19 01:42 am (UTC)
[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 11:49 am (UTC)
Oh that's a wonderfully Toshtastic way of getting word out and is perfect for this universe.

I adore your James and Jack interaction. Lovely!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 12:56 pm (UTC)
I wanted to keep the part in canon where she wrote the message in her own blood, but otherwise her actions had to "match" her talent. And as for Jack and James I still wanted to keep some of it -- James's loneliness and Jack's need to do something to heal him in spite of knowing he is doomed, which I think were the biggest component of their attraction in canon. If that comes across, I've suceeded!
[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 12:55 pm (UTC)
love the mystery, what Ianto saw and so hope that the falcon will deliver his message!

great chapter
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 19th, 2010 12:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com on January 21st, 2010 12:20 am (UTC)
you are doing a wonderful job. glad to see rhys more involved with events in torchwood.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 21st, 2010 07:45 pm (UTC)
I am working very hard to stick to canon outline but some things I think I do better. (arrogance much?)
[identity profile] samstjames.livejournal.com on January 21st, 2010 09:33 pm (UTC)
Oh, so awesome, so awesome!

(And I'd almost forgot about it because I've so much stuff to do...)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on January 21st, 2010 10:38 pm (UTC)
Busy, busy, busy is the order of the week for me too! Last part is coming along very slowly, unfortunately, because it insists that this episode is only part one of a two episode arc...