29 July 2008 @ 12:55 pm
Torchwood Fic: The Eye of Neith (7/10)  
Title: The Eye of Neith (7/10)
Author: Emma
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Rhys, Martha, Andy, John Hart; Jack/Ianto, mentions of past others
Rating: R, maybe
Disclaimer: Oh, please. If I owned them, would I let some of those idiots write the scripts? And if I were making any money off them, would I be where they could find me?
Spoilers: None. Takes place twenty or so years after Series 2 ends.
Summary: Torchwood’s past and Ianto’s future collide when Ianto’s former lover arrives in Cardiff asking for help…
Author's Note: Validium is featured in the classic Doctor Who episode Silver Nemesis

Homecoming is here; Part one is here; Part two is here; Part three is here; Part four is here ; Part five is here; Part six is here 

            Ianto lounged in one of the very comfortable armchairs Gwen had at some point substituted for the ratty old couch he remembered, and watched the reunion going on a few feet away.  The team had scattered to their stations, doing whatever it was they did when they wanted to give Jack a little privacy. That left Ianto to watch his lover and the being that had, in some way, redeemed him.

 

            The Time Lord looked the same as he did the last time Ianto had seen him, right after the last encounter with the Daleks. Time lines being what they were, he had no way of knowing how much time passed for the Doctor; everything from a few months to a thousand years was possible. Ianto knew it had been a little over ten years for Jack. He wondered if the Time Lord could see the change in the Captain as clearly as Ianto did himself.

 

            “Coffee?” John appeared at his elbow, mugs in hand. “I’m told that, though never as good as yours, I make a creditable cup.”

 

            “Thanks.” He took a cautious sip, and then nodded. “Good.”

 

            “Don’t sound so shocked, Eye-Candy,” John teased. “I’ve been around here long enough to learn a few things.”

 

            Ianto smiled at John and settled for a good offense. “Did Gwen send you or was this your own idea?”

 

            John looked a little shamefaced. “Look, Ianto… Gwen is worried. This guy is a Torchwood albatross.”

 

            “Not this time,” Ianto said calmly. “Trust Jack on this one. I do.”

 

            John made a face, but nodded.  They sat in companionable silence, sipping their coffee and waiting. A few minutes later the doctor started prowling through the Hub like a bloodhound on the scent.

 

            “Doc? Doc!” Jack chased him down and held him in place by the shoulders. “Focus here. We don’t have much time.”

 

            “Oh, but we do, Jack. Whatever will happen can’t happen until tomorrow night.” He turned his twinkling eyes to Isabella. “Isn’t that so, Nethisireinorallavnthyadorai?”

 

            ‘Ah… Doc… that Isabella. Professor Branciforte.”

 

            “Of course she is,” the Doctor said, hands in pockets, rocking back on his heels. “But she’s also Nethisi, Jack. She has to be. I did a little research after Martha called. Nethisi was a genius, even by Time Lord standards. Some say she was the intellectual equal of Rassilon himself. She also had a paranoid streak as wide as the Vortex. When she set herself up in the godding business, she wanted a way to control her priests. Well, priest really, she only had one at a time. Easier to manage. Sooo, she figured out how to make The One an extension of herself.”

 

            “How, doctor?” Ianto whispered, sickened. “How?”

 

            “Shall I tell him, Nethisi?” The doctor asked playfully. “Or shall you?”

 

            Isabella smiled. She had been sitting at Gwen’s station, idly swinging the chair from side to side. Now she stood and walked over to the doctor and Jack. Without a word, she unbuttoned her shirt to reveal her chest and the slope of her breasts. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, slowly, a dull red glow began to pulsate under her skin. It intensified until everyone could clearly see a tear-shaped red-and-gold object beating steadily above her heart.

 

            “Duw,” whispered Andy.

 

            Ianto made a small retching sound. Isabella-Nethisi looked in his direction.

 

            “Whatever we shared, when we made love, it was… mostly my mortal part.”

 

            “Mostly?”

 

             She shrugged. “Once in a while I desire pleasure again. Be proud, Ianto. There aren’t many living mortals who can say they have loved a goddess.”

 

            “Or a Time Lord,” muttered John.

 

            “And you, captain?” Isabella-Nethisi asked. “Do you feel jealous? Your young lover achieved what you could not.”

 

            “Jealous of what, Nethisi?” Jack smiled. “You had to trick Ianto into your bed, using the body of your servant. He comes to my bed willing, Time Lord. What we do together we do of our own free will, as equals, and there’s a sweetness in our love that you have never experienced. Not even when you were alive.”

 

            The stone at Isabella’s breast flashed violently, and then went dark.

 

            “You like to live dangerously, Captain,” Isabella massaged her chest. “You made Her very angry.”

 

            “No more games, Isabella,” Jack said grimly. “What is Nethisi’s stake in this?”

 

            “We were approached by Mrs. Saxon’s representative. She offered Nethisi a chance for a new body if Nethisi helped her regenerate her husband.”

 

            “That’s why two girls at the same time,’ John said. “They need to create two bodies.”

 

            “Her husband cannot be regenerated!” The Doctor burst out. “I burned the body myself.”

 

            “Did you destroy his ring? It’s a chameleon arch, doctor. The one who calls himself the Master had prepared for you. As he lay dying, he sent his consciousness into it.”

 

            “Impossible. Chameleon arches don’t work that way.”

 

            “Not in your time. But in Nethisi’s time, regeneration was uncertain. The rings were developed as a failsafe. If the regeneration process went wrong, the Time Lord’s consciousness would go into the ring until a new body could be grown or… obtained.” Isabella laughed at the Doctor’s expression. “There are things in your people’s past that do not bear close examination, Doctor.”

 

            “Why? Why would he do that? If he had chosen to live I would have helped him, protected him somehow.”

 

            Ianto saw the shadow fall across Jack’s face as his partner turned away from the Doctor. He could see Martha’s eyes, full of unshed tears. Sudden rage boiled over, and he stepped up to face the Time Lord.

 

            “And to think,” he said quietly, “that I spent years fearing you.”

 

            “Fearing me?” the Doctor yelped. “Whatever did I do to you?”

 

            “I knew how important you were to Jack. He loved you so much, he admired you so much, he believed in you so much that he lived in hell for a year to help buy you time. And all the thanks he got was to watch you weep over the body of his torturer. And still, when you needed him again, off he went.”

 

            “But he…”

 

            “For the first time in your long life, be quiet and listen.” Ianto’s voice became even gentler. “You are one of the most brilliant beings to ever live. You are the protector of the weak, the only hope of the helpless, the oncoming storm. But when it comes to those who love you, you are as thick as two short planks. Look at them, Doctor. You attract all these seemingly ordinary people and they transform themselves into heroes for love of you. Love transformed a two-bit con man into a guardian for this planet. Love transformed a sweet middle-class trainee doctor into a warrior that saved the world. You whine about being alone, and yet you abandon your best creations without a backward glance. You’d rather have a mass murderer that reminds you of the past than these brilliant children that could be your future.”

 

            He turned away from the stunned Time Lord and walked up to Jack, who stood stock still, face white with shock. “Don’t ask me to…”

 

            The rest of the sentence went unspoken, as Jack pulled him into his arms and kissed him, heedless of anyone watching. It was thank you and I love you and I will not abandon you and it’s forever, all conveyed by the firm pressure of lips, and the soft stroking of tongues, and the gentle brush of fingers against his neck.

 

            “Jack…” The usually chipper voice was suddenly old and tired. “Martha…”

 

            Ianto caressed Jack’s cheek. “Go to him. I think he’s finally figured out that he needs you.”

 

            He closed his eyes for a moment, taking a few deep breaths. When he opened them again he found John standing close, holding out his coffee mug.

 

            “I am going to make it my own special project,” the former time agent murmured, “never ever, ever to piss you off. Now, watch this.”

 

            John swaggered to the center of the Hub.

 

            “Well, now that we have the domestic out of the way” he said cheekily, “we need to get down to brass bolts. This regeneration party… where will it happen, and why not until tomorrow?”

 

            ‘The why I can tell you,” the Doctor said, releasing Martha’s hand. “TARDIS use Rift energy as fuel. The Eye has to recharge and it doesn’t have the ability to do it very well in its current state. It won’t be ready until tomorrow.”

 

            “And the where?” Andy said. ‘They can’t go back to the warehouse, and besides, Isa… she said it was all wrong.”

 

            “Mrs. Saxon’s not very free with information.” Isabella said. “The representative did say there was a very powerful place here. A place where a demon was defeated and an immortal hero died.”

 

             Ianto and Gwen spoke at the same time.  “Abaddon.”

 

            “Wasn’t that place reclaimed by the developers a while ago?” Andy asked. “It’s probably all fancy flats and shops where you pay a hundred quid for a Cymru t-shirt.”

 

            Gwen had been busy at her computer. “It will be, once they’re finished building. Four residence towers, shops, and a beautiful garden with a central fountain, lovely benches to while away the time, and four sculptures at the cardinal points.” Gwen turned her oversize monitor so everyone could see. “They call it Phoenix Park.”
 
 
 
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[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 05:23 pm (UTC)
First of all - GO!!! Ianto!!!! A certain Time Lord has needed that speech for some time now!

Second - wow! Just wow! John has developed - I think I might start to like him.

I love you weaving in Abbadon.

And I could feel Ianto's revulsion at what Bella really is!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 05:34 pm (UTC)
Yeah. I wanted someone to light into the doctor, who better than Ianto? And John -- well, I've always had a soft spot for him; but a little nicer and tamer, though not too much.
rhianona: sex coffee and aliens[personal profile] rhianona on July 29th, 2008 05:33 pm (UTC)
First; I love that Ianto went off on the Doctor and not just for what he did to Jack but also Martha. Neither myself nor my boyfr. get why Jack puts up with the Doctor given how he's treated. Second; I love Jack's speech to Isabella/Nethisi. It's just brilliant and perfect. Third; John was terrific in this - you've taken the potential he had in the show and really expanded it quite a bit. I love the peace offering he makes to Ianto with the cup of coffee and then his comment on how he will never piss Ianto off.

Fantastic chapter and I like how everything is starting to pull together.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I worked over that speech; I wwanted Jack to express what he felt about Ianto in a few short sentences-- and use the word "love". But Jack is all about indirectness, except when he takes direct action.

And John -- oh, I do like John. John has been beating the crap out of my dreams. He wants his own series.
[identity profile] 42footprints.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC)
John's response goes for me too, I would never want to get on the wrong side of that! All that genius, and human emotional understanding. The Doctor better be afraid. Also, Jack's speech to Nethisi is completely perfect. Goodness how he's changed. I'm loving this.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 07:20 pm (UTC)
Well, MY Jack has learned his lessons.
[identity profile] gypsylady.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
You whine about being alone, and yet you abandon your best creations without a backward glance. You’d rather have a mass murderer that reminds you of the past than these brilliant children that could be your future.”


I cheered out loud when I read this. I think my co-workers are off looking for a strait-jacket. But I do so much love this.

p.s. Hoping for a sequel when Walter Peabody "Ramses" Emerson comes to visit his old friend Captain Harkness. What? I'm just planting plot bunnies in hopes that they'll thrive...
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 07:20 pm (UTC)
I worked very hard on that speech. It needed to be said, dammit!

Ramses is going to have to stand in line! Andy wants his story told, and has even provided a title; there's something else about Ianto in this Universe... And John is really getting obstreperous!
[identity profile] itoshii-chan.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 09:12 pm (UTC)
*whistles in awe*

H.O.L.Y. WHOA!

That is is one bitch slap without actually bitch-slapping! Someone needs to tell the Doctor off and I can agree to no one better than Ianto - had a lot of ammunition for a showdown, too!!

BRAVO!

And speaking of bitch-slapping, the conversation between Jack and Iasabella was AWESOME! *smirks* I was rooting for Jack all the way, especially since a few chapters previous where when Jack asks Ianto if he trusts Isabella and he answers with a "I used to..." and goes into minute detail about being used as a pawn in between a war or something like that! I was just going, "Oh yeah!" and felt like glomping Ianto and then turning to Isabella, glaring, with a, "You F*CKING B*TCH!!!"

HAHAHAHAHAHA!

And John! *grins appreciatively* Your's is probably the second John that makes me like him and believe me, that's a feat! *grins* You developed his potential so much more than in the show and we knew he was capable of so much, so I'm happy! ^^

And finally... the Doctor! *sighs* Dude, finally glad someone handed your ass back to you... seriously!!

So, in conclusion...

*GIVES TWO THUMBS WAY, WAAAAAAAAAY UP*

*CHEEKY GRIN*


This chapter was BRILLIANT!! I'm extremely happy and even more so now that you're bringing in Abbadon! Bringing back/dealing with the past is really a part of what Torchwood is about, and you use the past so well!!

*_________________________________*

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE!!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I really did want to tell the Doctor off, but in a quiet, clinical way -- who better than Ianto. I'm glad you're enjoying this!
[identity profile] eawen-penallion.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)
"The Phoenix Park.” ?! Eek, the Rift and Cardiff have shifted to the left and landed here in Dublin!

Nah, not really - but wouldn't it be nice if Janto were based here in Dublin :-) Great story - I love fanfic that blossoms on a GOOD strong storyline.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 29th, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
In Dublin? OOH, that's one of my must-places-to-visit. Thanks for the comments -- I blossom on good reviews!
Auresse[personal profile] auresse on July 30th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
20 years around Jack and Gwen and kids... seems to have grounded John somewhat. He's very different, but you still maintain his voice.

AS for the story line? Wheheheheheheeeee! crazy~
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 30th, 2008 01:10 pm (UTC)
John is difficult because I wanted him to be more mature but still be his snarky self at times -- the story line -- let's just say that the next chapter is going to be a little more difficult, 'cause I still have two more barbs to plant!
[identity profile] lambsendbeds.livejournal.com on July 31st, 2008 08:57 am (UTC)
Oh my God I am in awe of you. *worships at your feet* First,you have my head spinning with all the brilliant plot twists. Second,your dialogue and character voices ring absolutely true. Jack's speech to Isabella was devestating and to the point and said volumes about their relationship in so few words. But Ianto's speech to the Doctor...I have read a lot of takes on this and I can honestly say that I have never seen the Doctor's sins summed up and thrown back at him in such a skillful,articulate and well thought out manner. You should be very proud of what you have achieved. And your John is awesome too. *worships you some more*
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on July 31st, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I worked hard at those speeches. They had to be in perfect voice -- Jack's not one to just say "I love him" and Ianto's not one to rant without direction. So they have to work. PS: part 8 is up! And John...well, he's awesome, but darn hard to write!
[identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 10:32 am (UTC)
Said so eloquently, words that will never be spoken in the episodes.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 2nd, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC)
I really,really have been wanting to clobber 10. After watching Journey's End last night I want to clobber him even more!
[identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com on August 3rd, 2008 02:54 pm (UTC)
He irritates me all the time. I loathe Ten.
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 3rd, 2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
I don't loathe him but I think sometimes he misses whole forests because he's concentrating on the color of bark... He's got a few more healthy kicks coming, at least in my Universe.
[identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com on August 3rd, 2008 06:31 pm (UTC)
Dr Who has always bothered me. He leaves death and destruction wherever he goes.
[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com on August 7th, 2008 08:58 pm (UTC)
YAY for Ianto!!!! I'm so glad someone FINALLY said what needed to be said to the Doctor! I recently saw for the first time the part where he calls Jack wrong (now granted I haven't watched any of the rest of the episodes) but it just seemed so weird for Jack to run off to help after being treated like that. So this warms my heart to see someone give him what for! And Phoenix Park...how appropriate!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 7th, 2008 11:38 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I have been wanting to give 10 a pice of my mind for a while, and having Ianto do it in his inimitable way... just sounded right for the context.
[identity profile] gingerlr.livejournal.com on August 20th, 2008 02:16 am (UTC)
Ianto telling off the Doctor.

You rock!
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 20th, 2008 04:03 am (UTC)
I had been wanting to tell 10 off for a while and this gave me my opportunity!
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 08:16 am (UTC)
YES! Finally someone tells the Doctor off about how he treats Jack and the other folks/children that travel with him! Thank you! Gods that has been bugging me! And his speech rocks. Nicely done.

Did I mention that its 1 in the morning and I cant stop reading this thing? :)
[identity profile] merucha.livejournal.com on August 25th, 2009 11:01 am (UTC)
As the author I am most pleased... as a person I'll say Go to bed!

And I had been wanting to tell the Doctor off for a while!
[identity profile] wynkat1313.livejournal.com on August 26th, 2009 06:35 am (UTC)
lol, thank you and you're welcome. I was having trouble sleeping and your story gave me a lovely distraction, or a good excuse, I refuse to say which. :)

I think a lot of us have been wanting to tell the Doctor off for a while now. Well, that and bring him in out of the rain.